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Reviews for The Prophecy Of Nine

By : Lisa2007
  • From ANON - Damariy Barbosa on November 02, 2008
    Don't take this the wrong way cause I applaude everyone who has the courage to write and post fan fic. but unless your name is Christine Feehan in reality biting off of her story lines and books is weak, please be orginal next time. I would much rather read something you thought up yourself
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  • From Bookworm51485 on April 28, 2008
    Well, it was overall a decent story. BUT I will repeat my criticism from before, everything is too synchronized between the nine. It's absurd. Prophecy, okay. That might excuse some of it (but not all), but at the end. All pregnant with twins. All girls. Lord, if I was in a house with that many girls I would shoot them all and then myself. I can't stand most of the female half of the species, especially those between the ages of about 5-25 (which might seem a bit odd as a female myself). Yeah, so I didn't love that 45 girls in one house thing but whatever floats your boat. Either way, it is nice that you finished, an accomplishment not shared by most fanfic authors. So congratulations on that. And you managed to put together a pretty decent story, that entertained many so congrats on that too. I will just reiterate one more time, for the future if you ever decide to do another similar story, avoid the synchronization. The same exact thing happening to a large group of connected people all at the exact same time. It's like 1 brain in a bunch of bodies. If they're not a hive, it doesn't work. It just becomes ridiculous.
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  • From lexjamandme on April 28, 2008
    Awww... the end is always sad, but thanks for sharing your story! I enjoyed it.
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  • From solitare1 on March 22, 2008
    A really great story. I have saved you to my favorite stories section. I never thought I would like a vampire story, but you changed my mind. Great Job!
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  • From solitare1 on March 01, 2008
    If the nine get out of this with their kids and their lives, their mates are going to be soooo pissed at them. Love the story and glad to see an update.
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  • From solitare1 on December 19, 2007
    Two words....Nerve Wracking! The are going to make me scream if they don't stop taking chances like this! I feel for the fathers thier nerves have got to be raw. Especially Sasuke's!
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  • From solitare1 on December 05, 2007
    Words cannot express how much I like this story. I can't believe I almost didn't start it. Thank goodness I did.
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  • From lexjamandme on December 04, 2007
    Ah... I'm glad you had Tsunade and Naruto make up. And as always, I just love your Sasuke and Naruto interactions. Too cute. And the way the demons can munipulated their mates... hysterical. Can't wait for more.
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  • From solitare1 on November 30, 2007
    I love this story. It is just sooo different I have to like it. Keep it up I'll always be here to read it.
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  • From solitare1 on November 17, 2007
    Wow, that was emotional...I really hurt for both Naruto and Tsunade but she has a lot of explaining to do.
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  • From lexjamandme on November 15, 2007
    What a good chapter. Their hormonal issues are funny, but the best part was the end. So intense and emotional. Poor Naruto. Poor Tsunade.
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  • From solitare1 on November 08, 2007
    WOW...what a story!! I like this vampire thing I didn't think I would but I do!! Nice going.
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  • From lexjamandme on November 08, 2007
    Well, that was hot to begin with. I love how you show the relationship between the nine demon vessel during their little talks. It would be cool to see the Carpathians like that more as well. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From lexjamandme on November 05, 2007
    Interesting prophecy. I like how your building Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, building their trust. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From lexjamandme on November 03, 2007
    So awesome! You'd think that Sasuke would know that you never tell Naruto NOT to do something. He's just gonna run out and try. He just can't help it. He's cute like that!
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