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Reviews for Who's Your Daddy

By : CassandraIncognito
  • From ANON - waveshrike on January 26, 2010
    I'd love to see you continue this. Hope you come back to it. Nice bit of realism with the shock and all.
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  • From ANON - LOLZ on December 10, 2008
    For someone who was just a making a lemon, the second chapter made this a decent fanfiction. I hope you continue this story. I would love to see how this turns out.
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  • From ANON - Kyu-Knight on June 18, 2008
    Hey you going to finish this or what? I find the story to be pretty hilarious from the second chapter, but you haven't updated in who knows how long. I wanna see how this ends
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  • From Imagy on January 25, 2008
    Oh my gawsh, LAWL!
    This is hilarious
    but
    I hope Sakura comes forward and soon about this
    I mean, not taking responsibility
    that's just an all time low, even for the "Sakura"s in bashings
    and she doesn't seem like a terrible character/person in this fic
    so I implore you
    not to let her become one
    oh
    and to update soon
    that's very important u_u
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  • From on January 17, 2008
    This was an interesting story and I am defiantly interested in seeing how everything works out! I haven't laughed that hard in a long time when Tsunade attacked Kakashi like that! It was hilarious! I look forward to future updates!
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 07, 2007
    hmm. looks good. i like the twist on the mpreg, and naruto's reaction and understanding seems pretty IC. i'm not so sure about tsunade's immeadiate assumption of kakashi's part in this. and naruto kept his promise. he didn't tell! ^_^ he's so sweet, i really hope things work out.~
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  • From roxnroll on December 06, 2007
    I knew it. That was cool. A pregnant Naruto!!! Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From ANON - sprourgy the kitsune on December 06, 2007
    Love It!!!! Can't wait to read more!! Please hurry!!!!
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  • From MoveThemHands on December 05, 2007
    God C-chan this story is sooo GOOD!!! I couldn't stop laughing until I got toward then the end then it killed me but still an awesome sorry.

    I can't wait for the update Heh, I freaking love Kakashi XDDD
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  • From yojami on October 28, 2007
    That was great... couldn't even tell that it was your first het. Anyway, I told you I would read it and review. Now it would be interesting twist for you to write it with their original genders for the second round. What do you think? ;) Or was this a one shot? hehehe.. oh well... As far as being in character, I think it works. Naruto is still rather shy.. heck, he couldn't even shake Gaara's hand... and Sakura clearly has become more forceful. So, I don't think you strayed from character. Besides, this is fanfiction.. hehe
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  • From candycrys on October 27, 2007
    OMG i loved this. i have never seen a fic go this way. great of you to think of it

    one last thin naruto and the perve sage ahhhhhhhhh my poor eyes
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 27, 2007
    I couldn't read it. I'm sorry. After Naruto refused because they were "friends" my suspended disbelief just collapsed.

    Write IN character please, and if you can't, then pick a character like Tenten or Tayuya who doesn't have enough character that you can just make her your own plaything.

    Naruto would fuck Sakura if she wanted him. The only reason he wouldn't is if he thought she didn't love him. It would have nothing to do with friends or anything like that.

    Sakura would never fuck Naruto unless she had a reason. "Looking good" doesn't do it. Naruto has to be romantic. He has to break through her misconceptions and make her happy and then she'll fuck him. That's the only way it's going to work. You could do this easily, but if you're not going to take the time to write characters properly, then just write generic smut and don't constrain yourself to the Naruto fandom.
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  • From ANON - andrew on October 27, 2007
    dude, sexy. i would have never thought of something like this. but come on dude, garra. a little weird, but ok. other than that, sakuraxino, hot. very smart story. so is naruto pregnat or what. well smrt story.
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 27, 2007
    holy fucking... god. i don't like naruxsaku. i really don't. ... really. no one believes me anymore. i barely believe me anymore. i clicked because it said mpreg, and i was like 'how the hell...?' but now i think i see how that would happen. anyway, i'm totally willing to read more of this. it was interesting, and decently written. i had no problem with the lemon, in fact i thought it was really good. i just saw a few run-ons and fragments. but those can be hard to pick up on sometimes. great job, and i hope to see more.~
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  • From MoveThemHands on October 27, 2007
    *dies laughing* Oh damn XDDDD

    That is freaking AWESOME!!! I love it *giggles* Poor poor Naruto can't be seme even in het sex *snorts*

    Though I'm not a fan of het that was absolutely enjoyable! Nice job ^___^
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