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Reviews for Demon Winds

By : Blckthorn
  • From ANON - jakes on May 10, 2009
    "if you think sex is a pain in the ass, you're doing it wrong."

    "kinky or perverted? kinky you use a feather, perverted you use the whole chicken."
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  • From ANON - my_perversities on June 27, 2008
    OMFG soooo HOT!! I LOVED it!! Although I do have some dissatisfaction.....mainly you left Gaara all alone in Suna to have afairs with others XD NOT COOL!!! They should totally work something out like using that chakra network (since Naruto has so much chakra he could jutsu him and Sasuke to Suna everyweek when they aren't on missions....or Tsunade could have them both transfered to Suna as a show of good faith and the connection of the Leaf and Sand villiages....) well that's how I end it anyways....much happier and Gaara isn't left as still an outcast. Well keep up the good work, I'll look forward to your next piece.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on April 19, 2008
    Ok that was absolutely fantastic, my only problem was with the EXCESSIVE use of the words, (zinging, twanging, zingzongidy) and any others like them, seriously used waaaaaay too much. Other than that this was utterly fantastic, keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From on December 26, 2007
    Wow... just, wow... So far I have read 11 chappies at once... finally gave in to the urge to review and tell you what a truly awesome writer you are!
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  • From ANON - foxandfriend on December 25, 2007
    A very satisfying ending, I really liked everything you wrote. Thank you so much for clearing up the claws and eating thing from my last review, I really do appreciate it. Overall this story is a ten, it is maybe a little shorter than I would have liked but isn't that the way it always is, the stories that you really like are always too short and the stupid ones seem to go on forever! Well I really liked it in any case.
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 25, 2007
    that was so frecken hot i cant say anything eles so let me know when the next chapter is done
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  • From ultistarmon on December 22, 2007
    This is a great story! I can't wait to read more, so update soon please!
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  • From Huronoryu on December 21, 2007
    *Slow, soft evil laughter gently rises from the dark corner of the computer lab* hehehehe... smut... hehehehehehe. Ooooooo... I loved it! ALOT! You updated and I could not ask for a better chapter... Poor Temari, scared for life... best throw Shikamaru/or other sexy bishounene her way to ... distract her. I was very happy with the three-way lemon. One chapter is far to long for these three to be inactive. Pity that Tsunade had to interrupt their fun... Jiraya seemed a bit traumatized too. (Kakashi just might get a surprise when he picks up the next book of Icha Icha Paradise.) I actually think that Tsunade was too focused on the negatives at this point (though I don't blame her what with everyone expecting a mass invasion and ending up with I.I.P. Yaoi smut- Live action version) but when you think about it- The Future Hokage, the present Kazekage and the most powerful Leaf ninja doing the horizontal tango, you couldn't imagine a better scenario for an alignment.

    And I must say that as Far as I could tell, any and all previous questions have been nicely answered. However, new question. Will Naruto and Sasuke be able to use the inter-village chakara lines in case of *ahem* emergencies. 'Cause you know they have the chakara reserves for it.

    It's very sad however that this story is ending... ... ... Dare I pray for a sequel?... ... ... Dare I ask if I could help write a sequel? ... ... ... ^O.O^ *Intensive Dragon Stare of Doom* ... please?

    Eagerly anticipating next chapter!
    BDQ
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  • From kallipso on December 19, 2007
    Great chapter. Thank you for answering my questions. The answers you had make sense. I can't wait for more. It is kind of sad that this will be ending so soon. Till next chapter.
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  • From ANON - star on December 19, 2007
    great chapter I hope that I get to read more soon
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  • From qoh on December 19, 2007
    this is a very amusing story, good job so far
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 18, 2007
    thats was awsome so let me know when the next chapter is done and is sasuke and naruto going to go public about there relationship
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on December 18, 2007
    Dani-sama, another excellent if melancholy chapter. Thank you. How will things change back at home?
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  • From serenagold on December 17, 2007
    Aw, its almost over. This story is so entertaining. ^^

    I wonder how the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke is going to change now that they're officially sorta mated. :P Hopefully Gaara will be able to join the fun more than just every 2-3 months. ;)
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  • From Huronoryu on December 12, 2007
    (Not really a review, more of a threat to the general reading public)
    Hello? *pokes at screen* Where are all the readers? was there a mass extinction somewhere that I totally slept through?
    Kallipso: *rubs eyes* Huh? what? Final.... must... finish... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
    BDQ: *Blinks* Okay, that's actually normal...
    Where are all the reviewers? I KNOW YOU'RE OUT THERE! I CAN HEAR YOU BREATHING! I WILL EAT YOU IF YOU DON'T REVIEW! YOU DO READ THIS STORY! I KNOW YOU DO! REVIEW DANG IT! WE MUST HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER! IT IS IMPERATIVE THAT I HAVE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
    Kallipso: Why is it so darn important?
    BDQ: NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS!
    Kallipso: *Rolls eyes* Oh, now I get it. Demon withdrawals. Whatever... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
    BDQ:*Rocking in a corner* MUST HAVE THE LEMON! NOW! *starts muttering* threesomes. must have my threesomes... *Snaps out of it* We only need 2 --TWO-- more reviews you lazy bunch. So get with they typing! Are your keyboards broken or what? I really love this story and if you can not tell already, I WANT MORE IF IT! SO REVIEW!

    To Dani~: Now THAT ought a do it! Please keep writing so when the next two reviews pop up *waves giant two bladed ax towards huddling mass of readers*, you can post right away.
    Kallipso: Yeah! and I promise I won't sleep through it... *collapses onto class notes* Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
    *Glares at readers again* REVIEW!

    Happy writing!
    BDQ and a snoring Kallipso


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