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Reviews for Demon Winds

By : Blckthorn
  • From Azami on December 01, 2007
    You are going to update soon aren't you? Cause I may go mad waiting. You wouldn't want that now would you?

    As you may have guessed I really like this fic. I think it could do with a little more detail in the non-sex related scenes, but over all very good.
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  • From tealeavesgreen on December 01, 2007
    holding a fic hostage for reviews is tacky and immature. Granted, this isn't exactly the best written fic I've ever read, since you've all but admitted that you didn't even plot it out in advance. At least you seem to give a token nod to grammar and spelling. Taunt =/= taut. You seriously need to worldbuild and work on your narrative structure. And putting "hooked claws" up somebody's ass would cause serious damage - the lining on the inside of you ass is incredibly thin. A major wound up there would cause no end to bleeding, infection, and possibly other problems as well. Also, demons though they may be, what are they doing for food and water? Are you just going to pull some "nurr they're demons" deus ex machina bullshit to explain why they aren't dead? And if they've got massive troll fangs ripping through their lips, their lips should be pretty fucking mangled by now. As in, where's my plastic surgeon? Naruto might heal up, but Gaara didn't get healing, he got shielding.

    Sign up for a few creative writing courses. You need to learn how to plan and structure.
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  • From Nanaka on December 01, 2007
    MORE! moremoremoremoremore!
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  • From serenagold on November 30, 2007
    Hehehehehehehe... I guess it was the Uchiha that broke the camel's back. ^^ I'm gonna laugh my ass off if Sasuke ends up pregnant. >:) (Not that I'm encouraging that, but it would be funny as hell.)

    I can't wait to see what the morning after conversation consists of. It would probably be awkward as hell, once Sasuke realizes that he belongs to two demons. Although, after all that continuous sex, I would be surprised if Gaara and Naruto didn't need a week to sleep it off.

    Keep up the good work! Can't wait until the next installment~!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on November 30, 2007
    The GaaSasuNaru lemon was hot!!! So their heat is over now? I wonder if anyone else will find out what they've been up to? Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 30, 2007
    that was amasing i was wating for that i figured that soner or later they would have to stop but i dident think that sasuke would join them and help them cam down that was awsome. SO let me know when the next chapter is done thak you........... ^-^
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  • From ANON - sarah on November 30, 2007
    Wow that was awsome..hot and very well written! do u do email alerts for new chapters?
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  • From ANON - Black Dragon Queen on November 30, 2007
    From the odd friend of Kallipso... ARE YOU TELEPATHIC? OMG! I LOVED THIS! I WAS JUST TELLING KALLIPSO OF MY IDEA OF SASUKE AND NARUTO IN LOVE BUT NARUTO BOUND TO GAARA THROUGH THE DEMON BLOOD ENDING IN A TRHEESOME! EEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKK~! 3-SOMES! YAY! *does a happy dance* Oh my GOD! I love this 3-way pairing! It's absolutely my favorite because I can just SO see something like that happening and I rarely find any fiction for it! I love this story! I love how they're *ahem* busy and everyone else is like "We're under attack! Run!" But all it is is Gaara and Naruto getting down and dirty! Oh, Poor Kankuro and Temari, I think they may be traumatized for life when Gaara returns with not 1 but TWO lovers! Both former enemy's and Leaf Nin's to boot! Hah! Oh, I hope all three of them stay together. It would just make my day. ((However I understand if you have it set up where it was Just Gaara helping Naruto out during a *snicker* hard time and it becomes just a SasuNaru. )) Oh, I can't wait for the next update! I was so happy when I arrived at the computer lab and Kallipso said you had updated and that I was going to "Go ballistic" when I read the new chapter. And she was right, I did. I think 90% of the people in here are ready to lynch me for all the giggling! and Snickers. and gnauffs. and table pounding. Oh! I love your style! Please Keep it Up! TO EVERYONE ELSE OUT THERE! REVIEW! NOW! Must... have... MORE... *Starts convulsing from lemon withdrawal.* Lemon, must have lemons! Must see everyone's reaction when they realize what EXACTLY all those Chakara energy waves REALLY are... ^0__________~^
    Happy Writing!
    BDQ
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  • From ANON - Setsu on November 30, 2007
    Ohhh I really hope you update soon ^.^ I like what I'm readng so far. Its well written, interesting, and yaoi! ^.^ great job so far I can't wait to see what happens next! Ja till next chap
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 30, 2007
    ya know, cliffhangers like this are hazardous to one's health ... dang! i'm glad sasuke got busy but he's gonna be sure i'll bet. oh, and i'm really glad the boys are back to normal adn real curious how you're going to have them explain what happened to everyone else. hmmmmm ...


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  • From UrbanPhoenix on November 30, 2007
    dude...that is seriously some hot stuff you are writing there. It is sooo delicious. And I was reading it during class can you imagine the face I would have had the whole time!? please...the next chapter must be soon...
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  • From Nanaka on November 30, 2007
    WOO!LOVE IT! MORE PLS!
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  • From ANON - KyuubiTamer on November 30, 2007
    (clamps hand to stop the nosebleed) That was so freakin' hot with the steamy threesome sex! Keep it up! =^ ^ =
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  • From kallipso on November 30, 2007
    Yea!!! I love this chapter. Interesting that adding Sasuke to the mix was just what was needed to finish their heat. Please keep it coming.
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  • From gravybaby on November 30, 2007
    BWAAAAAAAAAAA...........
    [jaw drops and an unsightly amount of drool drips off the readers chin]
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