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Reviews for Demon Winds

By : Blckthorn
  • From ANON - star on December 11, 2007
    great chapter I can't wait for more
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  • From ladyjess on December 10, 2007
    I am really enjoying your story so far. I'm glad you went back and made adjustment for the claws and food issue. That was bothering me a little. But hey, this is fantasy we are talking about so I didn't care. If I like the story line I can live with a few events being unrealistic. Anyway I look forward to your next chapter. You may have already answered this but how many chapters will this story have?
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 06, 2007
    Yeah that was awsome i hope u keep this going for a long time i realy like it so keep it going. If you can let me know when the next chapter is done
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  • From nm1716 on December 06, 2007
    I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From Huronoryu on December 05, 2007
    EEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKK! OMG! I loved it! WAI! Oh man, Jiraya and the others are going to FLIP when they realize just what exactly was going on in the shinny bubble of Love... ^0______~^ Oh, oh! Poor Temari, she found them naked... wait... LUCKY Temari, she got to see them naked! Oh man, *laughs* that was so funny! Oh and I can't WAIT for Tsunade to finally talk with Naruto. She is going to be so PISSED that she's getting all this grief from the other villages and it was just demon/teenage hormones~! I think Neji's going to have a nose bleed when he finds out just what the three were doing! *Busts out laughing* Oh wow! Loved it~! Loved it~! Loved it~! So like they're now "Soul mates"? Kinda? Chakara Mates? well whatever, they're 3 of the most powerful Ninja's getting laid regularly, I pity any fool who dared attack them... and will pay any one handsomely for any film they may have gotten. Well I'll say that that was One way to get a watertight alliance with Sand. Take the Kazekage, the future Hokaga and throw in one sexy Bishi for good measure and watch the sparks fly! And I loved the explanation with Kyuubi. I feel so sorry for him all alone in his cage... I Just want to run up and give him a big cuddle... well... maybe not... big teeth... possible plushy chew toy... *stares at current winter coat...* no. I'll just toss him a stake possibly the whole cow. Anyway my One and Only question. So with the fact that now they have to be together once a month how exactly will that work? I can see Sasuke being made Naruto's "Personal Body guard" and accompanies Naruto on his monthly "negotiations" with Gaara... ^o_________o^
    Please Update soon! PLEASE! ((To the world of readers: REVIEW! Or I'll Let Kyuubi out! I'm a dragon, we have that kind of power you know!))
    Happy Writing! BDQ
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 04, 2007
    Couple of questions. How are Temari and Tsunade-sama talking to eachother? How did Tsunade-sama make it all the way to Suna by teleporting. Most teleporting is in short distances. Wouldn't she be exhausted by doing that long of a teleport? Otherwise thanks for a great chapter I can't wait for more.
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  • From kagomegirl on December 04, 2007
    hahaa demon sex makes backlash chakra waves!! this fic is so awesome!! update again soon!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 03, 2007
    Another hot lemon!! Thanks for the new chapter, it was great! :)
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  • From ANON - Black Dragon Queen on December 03, 2007
    P.S. ~ Ignore the negative criticizers above! Not naming names ((starts with t, ends with green) but I think that some people complaining about the Claws and the Food issue in their reviews clearly have little narrow minds and need to expand their horizons some more. "Claws" in the Naruto realm do not damage, they only heighten the sensations! And who needs food when you're getting screwed six ways to heaven and back? If they did die from lack of food, you could bet all three died with smiles! And I know that sometimes when an idea strikes, the muse gods don't exactly iron out all the details, (my story as one example) but no story is ever perfectly plotted out. Stories have their own ideas of how to be written, and damn it if we have no choice but to listen.

    Kallipso also states, that obviously this person who we are not naming (t-green) obviously did NOT read your story correctly as you DID mention that a) they were living off their chakara and b)obviously Shukaku did remain in Gaara somewhat for him to react to Kyuubi in the first place!

    and you definitely do NOT need creative writing courses,
    This story is as creative as it gets! KEEP IT UP!
    Black Dragon Queen and Kallipso
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  • From ANON - Black Dragon Queen on December 03, 2007
    YAY! YOU UPDATED! HUZZA! HUZZA! Oh my GOD! I absolutely LOVED the *Ahem* Action in these last two chapters! My absolute Fav! I'm so happy that it's going to be a three way! Oh and poor Jiraya and the others, it seems that they have a few "problems" of their own! And that healing blue chakara, was it all three of their energies or was it just Sasuke? I mean, was there a REASON it was Sasuke that was able to calm the demon's lust? (I mean besides hot and heavy three way action) I don't think if if was anyone else it would have ended with the same results. Is he a "healer" of some kind or am I thinking about this way to deeply for what it was? Anyway! One last question: are there any CLOTHES in that dome? 'cuz if there isn't, poor Temari is going to see WAY more of her baby brother that she wants to. ^o___o^
    Happy Writing!
    Black Dragon Queen
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  • From ANON - Yanni on December 03, 2007
    WoW... I loved Sasuke's reaction when he found Naruto and Gaara! Oh and I know they are hungry especially Naruto and Gaara!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2007
    I LOOOOve it. This is one of the best fanfics out there. Hope you update reeeaaaallllly soon.
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  • From ANON - foxandfriend on December 01, 2007
    First of all I love what you have written so far and although there are a few small things that bothered me (claws when preping their passages, not eating or drinking especially in the desert and with all the fluids they are expending *snickers* ^^) they are very, very minor details on the whole. It is very entertaining, fun and smutty which is obviously the idea. Anyone who gets so caught up in the small stuff isn't really a good sport about the whole fanic thing. I have only one actual complaint (and it is only because he is my fav character) that poor, pretty, tortured(read: Emo) Neji gets no demon lovin'. And so while I would love for him to make it a quartet I get that it probably isn't in your plan and so that's cool too. I really like what you've done so far and look forward to future chapters.
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  • From kagomegirl on December 01, 2007
    OMG that was HOT!!!! you should really leave it at Sasu/naru/gaa and no others in their odd relationship. I love having it just the three of them. so hot!!! Update again soon!!!
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  • From ANON - KyuubiTamer on December 01, 2007
    Woah! Another steamy sex amoung friends, at least they were all thinking clearly. OMG, will they get caught?
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