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Reviews for Odd Admiration Chapter 7

By : hatochan
  • From ANON - NeonOranges on November 17, 2007
    Oh my god! The warm fluffy feelings!
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  • From ANON - Anise on October 27, 2007
    You're alive and updating! YAY!! *throws confetti*
    I thought maybe we had lost you to the real world but I'm glad your back, the fandom isn't the same without your smut! And what fabulous smut it is, bondage, spanking and all this within catching distance of the mini-nins, the only thing you didn't have was masterbation ;)
    As always the smut is really well written but I also liked the little things like Ko-chan signing for Genji with a nickname and cuddling up to him when he got back, Genma and the pervert signing (why does that not surprise me in the least) and I wonder how Sakura feels now that she gets to experience being the center of a rivalry (so-to-speak) for her attention. Also another little hint about Ruka not liking the whole sensei thing in the bedroom or supply closet as it were, I keep wondering about that back story.
    I have to admit when I first started to read this I didn't think that we would get porn, it isn't the kind of story you would think of smut going with but of course I should have known, I read enough fanfic to know that closets are the best place to have wild kinky sex and schools are just full of supply closets! So it's nice to see you've been able to find some time do do some writing, I've missed your stuff it feels like it's been forever but as with everything else you seem to write I absolutely loved it! There really isn't many who can beat your pr0n it's always very delicious and as always you are the best :)
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  • From LindyStar on October 26, 2007
    *gulp, shiver, passes out*

    I loved the spanking part. I especially loved the part about SmackMaster!Iruka and Helpless!Horny!Cumming!Kakashi bent over his knee. *Hur hur hur, drool*

    Very well done, i say.
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  • From Travellyr on October 26, 2007
    HOOOOOOT.
    Spanking? Hot. I like that they both like it... and that Iruka is better, but neither one really cares.
    And the end was so sweet and fuzzy... and funny. Thirty minutes of cleanup for a quickie sounds about right. XD And poor Sakura... but everything was going as expected!

    "full of the Spirit of Youth" BAH HA HA HA HA. Iruka is a genius for applying Gai-sensei to the mystery of why children are ALWAYS hyperactive when they're sleep deprived.

    Ko-chan and Genji-kun are adoraboo to the nth degree- I just want to cuddle and squeeze them and squee quietly. ^-^!!!
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