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Reviews for Taming Sasuke

By : Reyn

From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2010
(I review as I read.)

“… having sex at a young age was nothing unusual in a ninja’s upbringing—hell, it was even encouraged …” That line surprised me when I first read it and I was wondering why it was encouraged, but I just figured it out: ninjas don’t always live long. ____ “Dishonor on your cow,” lol. ^^ ____ Yeesh. Scary mission. So what’s his secret, that he’s gay? ____ “… he was sorely mistaken.” Uh-oh. ____ Holy cow, 134 family members? I figured there were a lot of people in the clan, but I didn’t think there were that many. And if they were, they weren’t in the immediate area. Like they had branched out with other families or married into other clans or such. ____ And why the hell are his family so uptight? Did they find out about the mission? Because if not, then their behavior could have the opposite effect. And so long as he’s tailed like that, no one’s ever likely to forget and there’d be no way for Sasuke to make up for the “shame”. ____ Oh crap. He got caught, didn’t he…. Wait a second. The story said that he returned home after six months and things were still harsh with his family. Then it mentions a “special day” and he’s just finishing up his mission … is it a new mission, or was there a plot hole and it’s meant to be part of the six-month one? Cuz it seems like the “big boss himself” means the guy who likes young boys. ____ Okay, I think I got it. That incident with the pedophile & co. was towards the tail-end of his mission and he hadn’t returned home yet to the 134 family members tailing him. If that’s correct, you might want to save the 134-and-so-on information until after that scene. ____ “Only to have his vision swim red.” That doesn’t sound good. Sounds like he’s going on the defensive/aggressive. ____ Oh. That’s why he was pissed. Lol. ^^ ____ Jeez. Count on Sasuke to hold a grudge. ____ He’s not seriously thinking of drowning Naruto to death, is he? … Heh—you know, even without Itachi messing up his life, Sasuke’s still scary as hell when mad. Bordering on psycho. ____ And how the hell did Naruto’s bird find Sasuke anyways? ____ Haha, you almost had me there. No cutesy-looking Naruto for this story! ^_^ ____ I wonder if Naruto really does know the details of Sasuke’s mission. It’s natural for Sasuke to be a bit paranoid about it, though. ____ Yay, thanks for bringing up the suspicion about how the bird found Sasuke. ____ Teehee, “happy trail”. ____ Haha! That line about soldier pills made me laugh. XD ____ “I bet you’re just jealous that puberty liked me better than it did you!” Ooooooooh…. ____ I guess for a man Sasuke would be a little disappointed. I personally find him very masculine, but he is pretty—though not necessarily in a feminine way. ____ Hahahaha, comparing penis size. I guess if Sasuke’s promiscuous now, he probably would’ve done the penis size thing at 13 years old. ____(*shivers*) Love the bit about Naruto’s voice change. ____ Heheh—love the way Naruto’s prodding Sasuke (pun NOT intended, though I know it’s there) with his questions. ____ Oh god, he named it too! XD ____ “Grinning at him in a manner that gave him a way out if he so chose.” How’s that? ____ Well, then, LET’S SEE IT, NARUTO!! XD ____ “You want me to try to be sexy?” He has a point. He doesn’t need to try. ____ “Ouch. That came out sounding a lot harsher than he intended.” I like how he noticed that. ____ Heh—surprise, Sasuke. ____ “I wouldn’t mess around with something like this, Sasuke.” Very sexy line. =0 ____ Dang, Sasuke doesn’t waste any time. ____ So Sasuke was having sex with that guy…. (*shrug*) Okay, whatever. ____ “Tears of joy,” he actually said that? That surprises me. ____ But that next line makes it worth it! ____ Huh. I’m kinda missing the sarcasm as well. ____ “If you treat me like one of your conquests, of course it’s going to hurt.” Good line. ____ In a way, I kinda think that Sasuke likes the pain. ____ Heh—Naruto’s beginning to babble. Right in the middle of sex, too. Lol. ____ I like these: “Sasuke slowly pulled his body up and allowed gravity to take over as he slid back down and holy shit. / “Sasuke did it again.” Very expressive of how it feels. ____ “The raven-haired boy could have sworn he saw blue eyes flash red at the challenge, but he wasn’t given much of a chance to dwell on it …” Another good line. I like his surprise, though I would’ve thought he’d seen it from time to time, being on Naruto’s team. ____ The erotica is amazingly written, I gotta say. ____ “Four to six rounds,” are you serious? ____ “Was it normal to lose such control over your body during sex?” That line is very interesting. It says a lot about what Sasuke was like in his previous experiences. ____ “Sasuke screamed.” Naruto wins. Though it probably wouldn’t matter much to either of them if he didn’t win. I wouldn’t be surprised if they’d forgot about the challenge. ____ Heh—Sasuke forgot all about his revenge as well, I think. Though he’ll probably think of it in a minute. ____ I LOVE Sasuke’s first line afterwards! “You broke the table, dumb ass.” XD ____ Love Sasuke’s ambiguous argument about the table. ____ “I’m going to kick your ass.” / “Okay.” That’s also mildly surprising, though funny. ____ At least Sakura’s not walking right in the door. It is Naruto’s room, after all, and she’s very courteous when it comes to that sort of thing. ____ Lol, “virgin eyes.” XD ____ LOVE THE RETURN OF THE BIRTHDAY PRESENT TOPIC! XDDD ____ Oh! I guess he forgot all about the revenge! =)

I loved this story. One of the best well-written erotic fanfics I’ve read. My only complaints are the part I mentioned earlier about being confused over the timeline, and so much of the word “dobe”—Sasuke doesn’t call Naruto that very often.
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From loveusender on April 14, 2010
I LOVED IT!! very well written i must say..Sasuke was too worried about his reputation with Naruto, he likes him just the way he is..:D Plus Sasuke is such a sneaky bastard too.I expected Naruto to be well hung.*smirks*
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From Kerrisa on January 24, 2010
I' pretty sure I read this around the time you first posted it, but I dunno if i left a review then. Either way i think it has the sweetest ending! Sasuke has changed his promiscuous ways for one particular blonde-haired dobe =) I like Sasuke in the wanton uke role, he's super sexy =]!! And of course i've got nothing but love for Naruto and his large endowments and how he thoroughly pleases Sasuke with his man-bits and simply being himself. Happy ending all the way around! Loved it loved it loved it!! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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From ladygizarme on October 24, 2008
This was totally cute and hot! OMG... I...had a lot I wanted to say, that I thought of WHILE reading, and now my brain is deciding not to work apparently...shoulda wrote it out while reading.. >.< Sorry! But this was awesome, I loved it! Like... I love how you portrayed Sasuke. And, aww, was he being a promiscuous little boy cuz of his assumption that his feelings for Naru would be forever unrequited?? And the way Naruto's new appearance totally made his brain go awol a few times--too cute! I also loved Naruto's complaint that Sasuke was only upset cuz puberty didn't love him as much as it did Naruto lol. The smut was HOT, omg *nosebleed* SERIOUSLY. I love how...WILD and PASSIONATE it was. Your descriptions were great. And then the end, Sasuke's answer to Sakura's question--SO SWEET! He's a sentimental bastard *awww*

hehe, Naruto's misunderstanding is comedy icing on the cake. ^_^

Ok...I guess I am happy enough with this review lol..I'm tired, so I will go now. :p

~ lg
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From ANON - Mata on December 04, 2007
Hot hot hot!! Love it when Sasuke gets owned. Yum.
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From Sessygirl on November 30, 2007
I have to say that this was very sexy and very cute.

Great job.

-Akiru-
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From gravybaby on November 30, 2007
I didn't know weather to laugh or drool...so I did both...very messy....
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From ANON - Kang on November 30, 2007
Holy shite, that was a lot better than i expected it to be! I mean, the summary was okay, and the title had the air of being rather classy, what with Shakespearean references and all, but i was still was just looking for "moderately entertaining." I feel so happy and grateful to have found "fantastically entertaining." I absolutely loved it. It was a little confusing at first, with the Itachi-less world AU not being explained because mentioning Sasuke's family being around automatically made me imagine Sasuke as 6 years old, and then references to him being promiscuous had me going, "whut??? as a little kid?!" but I figured it out. :P Loved the monster cock imagery--especially the vivid imagery of Sasuke riding Naruto's huge erection right before the blonde mentions his control is about to snap. Mmmm, yummy. It's refreshing to read something without atrocious grammar, and chock full of sexy and just enough l-o-v-e tangible between the two boys to make it all that much more meaningful and squeal-worthy. All things considered, fantastic job, dear. ♥ you've made my evening.
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From Carola on October 25, 2007
Omg, YOU wrote this? *loves on you for all the YotF reviews*

I read this last night on eljay, but it was being a bitch and didn't let me comment X___X
Neways, let's just say I was very entertained.
You had me from the start with 'and yes, dishonor on your cow'. MULAN! xD
First off: I LOVED Sasuke's reaction to Naruto's suddenly having hit puberty. *dies*
And though I can't picture Sasuke actually being immature enough to compare sizes... I TAKE MY HAT OFF! xD

I love the way you wrote this; every description, thought and feeling was so intense. Also, I love how you write it to be so hot and still remain the humorous tone! *3*
Sasuke's 'ow ow ow ow' really killed me xD

Yeah, done rambling now.
But I saved this fic to my computer incase it ever disappears off the internets.
*loves* And woah, I don't even care for NaruSasu. xD
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From hisoka on October 25, 2007
SO YOU SCREW HIM TO TAME HIM...WOW,WHAT A LIFE.IF YOU WERE TO CONTINUE THIS ALOT WOULD READ IT BUT IF YOU DONT ALOT WILL ALSO READ IT.NICELY DONE
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From LadyWolf on October 24, 2007
I love it!!!!! This was so cute....!!! Will this continue?????
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From Raina on October 24, 2007
LOVE it!
Funny and smexy rolled into one awesome fanfic.
I loved:

"What the hell? He looked like a smaller version of Yondaime!! What happened to the slender frame? The chubby little cheeks? The shortness!!" LMAO, the shortness! Awesome.

Thanks so much for writing and sharing.

-Aikage
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From lexjamandme on October 24, 2007
Ah that was cute. Normally I'm all about a seme Sasuke, but this was great. I loved Sasuke's choices at the end.
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From ANON - Word_Slave on October 24, 2007
Ohh, that was great , and incredibly sexy!!! My only thoughts were that you by skipping over the part where Sasuke prepares himself and one other thing, I can't remember right off, if you want I can look back and let you know if you want, anyway, it would have made it even hotter! Oh, and please don't leave this here, add another chapter! I'd love to see when Sasuke decides he's okay with telling the world, or not.
Slave
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From Zrina on October 24, 2007
All Hail the Great Uzumaki Cock!!!

lol, that was great!! Sasuke was such a SLUT!!! But we all know he would be under those circumstances! It was cute though that he had been trying hard to bury his feelings for Naruto. Makes you wonder if Yondy HAD sent him specifically on that mission to get his sluttiness out of his system. :D

Awesome story, loved the humor and the smex was awesome!
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