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By : skyblueeyes
  • From on January 02, 2008
    Reminds me of a doujin I read. Cute.
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  • From SasUke28 on October 24, 2007
    lol i read this doujinshi too! Its in sasuxnaruislove.snowfaerie.net and I loved it. You're story was great execpt for the japanese part.It's konichiwa
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  • From katsuyo on October 24, 2007
    Um - not so bright... the artist is Yukimachiya... not Yukimichiya. My bad. lol
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  • From katsuyo on October 24, 2007
    I commend you for stating that you got the idea from a doujinshi you read. However, you need to give the proper credit to both the work and the author...that's the way a disclaimer works.

    The name of the doujinshi chapter your work is mirrored on is called "Song of Going Around the Moon Tonight." It's from the Yukimachiya Collection 2.1 and it's by the artist, Yukimichiya.

    I hope that helps!

    Sincerely,

    katsuyo
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  • From Kativachan on October 24, 2007
    At least credit the doujinshi...
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  • From KoibitoFemme on October 23, 2007
    Hey this story sounds alot like this doujinshi I read with Naruto and Sasuke just not so X rated. COOL! Nice twist.
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  • From lexjamandme on October 23, 2007
    Awesome! Silly Sasuke thinking he can pull a fast one on Naruto. I would love a sequel!
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  • From ANON - CJ on October 23, 2007
    Oh yeah, I vote for a sequeal. That was very hot (sitting in front of a fan to cool me down.)

    Loved it and wants more.
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  • From ringpop on October 23, 2007
    I LLLLLLLLOVED IT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2007
    Like it, though you should say that you got the idea from a doujinshi in your disclaimer, or you gonna upset a lot of people!
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  • From solitare1 on October 23, 2007
    Hell Yeah! A sequel or 3(LOL) Very good and funny story. Loved it.
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  • From TheGingerLady on October 23, 2007
    Hell yeah!! make a sequal!
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  • From ANON - TenshiHaku on October 23, 2007
    Great story, one question though, did you have Naruto use te female watashi wa to make it more believable he was Aya-chan or was it supposed to be the male boku wa? Also it's konnichiwa.
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  • From narutovixen383 on October 23, 2007
    Mmmmmm, what a sexy mission!! I would have to say, of course make a sequel! I want to know what happens between Naruto and Sasuke, and I am sure that Naruto wants to be able to see Sasuke during the lemon next time ;)
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  • From katsuyo on October 23, 2007
    Okay...it wasn't half bad. Two things though... When did Naruto change out of his Sexy no Jutsu form. I don't see that part in your story.
    The other thing - this plot is way too familiar to me...in fact, I own the Doujinshi this story is from.
    It's from the Yakimachiya Collection 2.1 - who is known for his Sasuke/Naruto ANBU pairing stories.
    There are way too many similarities between your story and the doujinshi to be a mere coincidence.
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