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Reviews for Territorial

By : Hedder
  • From Eremi22 on July 12, 2009
    Chick, where have you been!?!?
    You've been away forever!

    You really can't just leave a story that rocks like this
    hanging without any word you know, it kills the fans.

    Even if life simply reared it's ugly, pessimistic head,
    just let us know so we can semi-patiently lie in wait.

    If you just forgot, well then, there isn't much of an excuse.

    No matter whatthe reason though, you should repent by updating!
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  • From idemillions on February 20, 2009
    UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!!
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  • From blackash13 on September 20, 2008
    Really really gooD!!!! please continue i love iruka as uke!!!!
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  • From ANON - sethian on September 11, 2008
    I love you fic! really wow! Each time you update I reread the whole thing and I love it as much as the first time! I hope you'll uptade soon, your story has a lot of potential!!!
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  • From Travellyr on September 08, 2008
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

    I am so happy to see this come back with an update! I love the sexual tension in this story; you really do an absolutely delicious job with it and with the misunderstandings and awkward moments and meddling family... I "had" to reread it all, and laughed and stayed up a bit too late... slap-fights over the top of bathroom stalls, anyone? Rancid puppy breath? Yes, thank you! :D
    I mean... YAY. And the ending scene (shower, Kiba torture, amusement at Kiba torture, subtle submission, making out, and interruption!) was my favorite. :D

    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on September 05, 2008
    this has to be the most addicting story i have ever read!! i really like how you portray kiba in this story. i don't know a lot about dogs but i like how you explained everything. please don't make us fans wait to long for the next upate!!!
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  • From ANON - ree on September 04, 2008
    yay!! love the update!! =) great job! i love Iruka and Kiba pairing..sadly not much out there to read. *sigh*
    SMEXY time!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2008
    whoot!!! update lol loved it and cant wait for the next one =)
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  • From honZeldaFitz on September 01, 2008
    This is one of my favorites. I'm glad you're back. ^__^

    They are such an interesting pair, especially with all the canine behaviors thrown in. Kiba is a stressed-out mess and poor Iruka doesn't know what to do next.

    Thanks for the new chapter. I'm already looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - sollerine on September 01, 2008
    Oh my gosh!!! This is the most unusual pairing, but I seriously can't get enough of it! Please and most definately continue!!!!!
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  • From antilogicgirl on September 01, 2008
    heeheh. Those two make me giggle. Nice job, once again. Thanks for the update, as well. Looking forward to the next bit. ^_^
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  • From Eremi22 on September 01, 2008
    I love the last part the most I think. Now there isn't any way Iruka can hide all of the marks unless he wears his hair down. It made me giggle uncontrollably. I'm looking forward to your next update quite a bit!
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  • From mizukiruhoh on September 01, 2008
    yay! a new chapter! such a sweet forbidden fruit kind of story. Part of me is with Iruka's reasoning. Iruka was Kiba's teacher, how can he think of kiba as anything other than a student and yet, kiba is now an adult, and a handsome scoundrel at that! How torn poor Iruka is. How greatly written this story is an amazing story that just pulls me in. I Love it.
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  • From ANON - silentnight on September 01, 2008
    i love the tension and build up. sooooooooooooo hot!
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  • From drivven on August 31, 2008
    Yay! You're back! I really wanted to see this one finished. I love this pairing! You actually inspired me to these two. It was a co-author with a friend, but I wrote the IruKiba. (yeah Iruka seme is odd, but it was fun) I really hope you update soon hon. I love this story line. -dancing in the chair- Woot!
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