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Reviews for Territorial

By : Hedder
  • From antilogicgirl on November 21, 2007
    Someone is in very big trouble. Kiba is going to need several layers of flak vests when his mother gets hold of him. Still nicely done, though you might want to give it one more look for typos. I found a couple, though it isn't anything earth-shattering. Keep up the good work.

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2007
    I love your story! I like your keen observation on dog behavior and how you applied them to humans. One of my favorites now ~ can't wait for more! =D
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  • From SakuraKaizoku on November 21, 2007
    Amazing story!! I can't wait to see where it goes! REally can't wait until you update! But, do take your time. It's your story, don't let us rush you!
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  • From Picspixie on November 21, 2007
    ugh at first i thought this was a kiba/naru story, please put that its an kiba/iruka story in the summary, *shudder* did not need to get that picture in my head
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  • From leanne on November 20, 2007
    Totally awsome! I love Iruka and Kiba is just so damned sexy! more please.
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  • From NeonOranges on November 20, 2007
    Yay! Fourth chapter! I've been waiting for this, Akamaru is amazing in this story, you really give him the type of personality I always thought he'd have.
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  • From charmpit on November 20, 2007
    Holy Jiminy Cricket! Kiba and Iruka? Hell, Genma and Kakashi?! You got brand-new on all of us, sweetheart. You should be pleased with yourself.

    This is definitely one for the recommended reading list. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, whatever you do do NOT abandon this fic!
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  • From ANON - J. Hoshi on November 20, 2007
    Nice and funny! Mathmaticall equations, good distraction though!
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  • From DuosAngel on November 20, 2007
    Oh wow, I've never even thought about these two getting together before but I'm dying to see them finally get together in this. Please update soon!
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  • From tovah on November 20, 2007
    This is Soooooo Good!!! I can not wait for another chapter. I think the pairing is cute, one you don't see very often But when fics like this come along it makes you glad someone thought of it. Please update soon I'll be waiting.
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  • From janas on November 20, 2007
    love dis story...
    update soon!!!
    your chapters are really long yet i seem to want more
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  • From sethian on November 20, 2007
    Wow! This fic is Awesome!!! dear Kiba is so sexy in it!! You have to keep up writing it, the story has so much possiblities! I'm looking forward to reading it!
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  • From ANON - ruinedkuria on November 20, 2007
    F-ing hot! And an interesting pairing to boot. *flails* Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Nickname on November 16, 2007
    Things certainly are progressing.

    Can't wait to see what happens next!

    ~ PP
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  • From ANON - Rose on November 12, 2007
    your story is one of the best i have read in a long time. Please write some more I was instantly hooked, and need to know what happens between them. Keep up the good work.
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