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Reviews for Honesty in a Bathroom

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From Jelp on April 07, 2010
    LOL!

    I have actually recently been reading some Japanese translations, and you're right. It is like n/c with an, "I really actually wanted it but couldn't tell you at the time" kind of thing. XD

    Loved it nonetheless. ;) ~ Jelp
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  • From Sigart on November 24, 2008
    Oh man. I really like the way your mind works. ...Even if the love confessions are really weird. I think if you end it with something like that you should have started it with something like sneaky looks or something. Like...

    "Sasuke looked up from his papers and his black eyes met the blue eyes of one of his students. So Naruto had decided to show up today?" yadda, yadda, incorporate something about how he thought it was a shame Naruto turned up so rarely and throw in an excuse like how Naruto wasn't as stupid as he tended to pretend (or something) just so they have some kind of history, you know? So it's not like they don't know each other at all and then slam bam "I love you" XD

    But either way. Man. You write good smut *_* I really do like the non-con with consent you write XD So hot.
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  • From ANON - Panting for More on June 02, 2008
    I have to admit you got the style down to an art form
    THat was a very random PWP but enjoyable non-the-less, where ever you came up with the showerhead idea, pure genius!!
    Wouldn't mind reading another of your PWP's, good work, very interesting Student/Teacher thing.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on March 12, 2008
    brilliant, scanlation style eh....i think you have something.
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  • From Imagy on January 18, 2008
    I'm starting to see a theme in your stories
    and I like it (the theme)
    :D
    good work, lovey!
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  • From ANON - sesshoumaru4me on January 13, 2008
    omg HOT!!! More please :)
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  • From hisoka on October 25, 2007
    LOVE,IT WASNT REALLY RAPE WAS IT.DID HE JUST COME UP WITH THAT NAME AND WHEN DID NARUTO FIGURE OUT SASUKES FIRST NAME,PROBLY DURING INTRODUCTIONS NE.WAS NICE CRAZY PUNISHMENT FOR A TAKEN MAGAZINE
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  • From noit on October 24, 2007
    Behind the cruel act, there's luv-luv. ;)
    The ending was really sweet. I like the other gentle side shown by
    Naruto at the end of story.


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  • From gaara89 on October 23, 2007
    Nice job. I look forward to more from you.
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  • From ANON - Ezzy on October 23, 2007
    *blinks* wow, that as a side of Naruto I thought I'd never see...but still it was a good read. Short, to the point and perfectly smut-tacular! lol, its interesting to see writers try something a bit different from their usual style and it usually is a surprise, such as with this fic.

    Great :)
    Ezzy
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  • From ANON - FD on October 23, 2007
    Yeah, a lot of doujinshi has plots like that huh? I personally don't like the n/c stuff too much but this was cool for what it was. I'd like to read another anyway!
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  • From lexjamandme on October 22, 2007
    I agree that sometimes your reading along and then there's these outlandish confessions at the end, but honestly, would I be happier if Sasuke stood up and murdered Naruto? Or perhaps called the police and had everyone's asses put in jail? Or jumped off a building because he's Uchiha pride was hurt?? Nah, bring on the yaoi fluff and mindless confessions. ;)
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  • From aiesha on October 22, 2007
    dude, i loved it. I admit it was a little cheesy at the end, but as you say, in the original manga n/c smut style, they do confess at the end. you wrote this fic so well, i loved it! i can't wait to read more fic's by you... until then, this is midnight saying, ja.
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  • From despairs on October 22, 2007
    Brilliant! You did indeed succeed. More please.
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  • From Allys on October 22, 2007
    You succeeded beautifully honey XD. I must admit the confession at the end threw me, but, *snicker* I know those scanlations your talking about so, yeah you Pwn. I just hadn't expected it from you XD. But I must say the smut was hella sexy, very messy and carnal, and OMG, Younger Naru-seme was Hott Hott HOTT. LOL, This would make an excellent addition to sensitive pornograph XD. Did you say you have a longer story planned? Or are you actually making a doujinshi??
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