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Reviews for The Guardian

By : Midnightstorm
  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 04, 2007
    This is great, but a horrible place to leave us hanging if you're going to have trouble updating. I can't wait for Naruto to jump Sasuke
    Slave
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  • From despairs on November 04, 2007
    I just read it again...the only thing that really bother me is the kiss at the end. Sasuke seemed REALLY into it :( If thats acting then he needs to become an actor. He would win all kinds of awards. I really hope he isnt into Karin now *cries* I blame Naruto..why did he have to get with that Hana anyways...he knows deep down he has feelings for Sasuke. *growls* I thought it was going to be a good thing for Sasuke to be homeschooled, i thought it would bring them closer together but all it really did was get the blonde DOBE a new girlfriend. Wahhhhhhhhh! If Naruto thought Sasuke was so bad at kissing then why didnt HE teach him. BLAH! Ok now i'm done ranting lol.
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  • From beekayz on November 04, 2007
    Ahh I'm sad to hear things are getting too busy! You have my full support! *salutes* I really like the time skip here I think it really compliments the story flow. I really can't wait to see what happens next now that Sasuke is a hot piece of ass mwaahahah! You're one of the few writers I like and to hear you under such stress makes me sad. XD Anyways! Thanks for the update this time and I sit on the edge of my seat for the next installment!
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  • From lindsey82 on November 04, 2007
    You make the whole chapter het and even end it that way and then say it'll be a while for an update, if there will be one at all?

    Ugh.
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  • From blueh on November 04, 2007
    I totally love this story... It's just so great! Love how you made Sasuke work his body. Now that Naruto's jealous, I wonder what'll happen next. ^^ Keep writing! And here are some cookies!
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  • From narutovixen383 on November 04, 2007
    Mmmmmmmmm smexy!! Wow, you did exactly what I would have done! The story line is excellent and I love it still! I think it was time to add a bit of jealousy into Naruto's life and you started off perfectly! How much longer until they start to really get together?? I can be patient but I am also very curious! Today is my birthday too so I'm glad that some of my favorite stories are being updated! It makes me feel so much better! Also, if you need to take more time off, then that's always a good thing in the long run because it is your life and you know what is best for you. I will still be a fan of your writings and will look forward to when you do update. Just please don't abandon the story and keep it running with all the great ideas you have...and thank you for the enjoyable chapters you have written so far!
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  • From despairs on November 04, 2007
    Ok i'm rewriting my review lol. I was unhappy with my first one so... anyways kudos to Sasuke for doing everything in his power to get stubborn, muleheaded Naruto to open his eyes and see him as somebody he could love and have a relationship with...no better way than a little jealousy eh. Well it worked lol...i even got a little (ok more than a little) jealous on Naruto's behalf....darn baka. I just really can't stand Karin.

    Anyways...take your time updating :D Dont worry 'bout ya fans, we will all still be here waiting for you.
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  • From akiravadel on October 30, 2007
    AHHH!!!! You left it hanging at the worst possible spot! >.< Keep up the great work! I like the way you changed their pasts. eep up the great work!

    ~Akira~
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  • From narutovixen383 on October 30, 2007
    AHHHHHHH another good chapter (even though it was full of angst, it was still amazing)!!! You are a writing machine and I like that!! I just hope that your "on-button" doesn't malfunction and have to take time to be fixed. A lot of authors stop what they're doing and they come back a lot later and I always wonder where they went and it makes me sad! And I'm crazy for this story! I want to know what Sasuke means at the end! Is he going to make Naruto jealous?? Please keep up the great work!
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  • From despairs on October 30, 2007
    Ah this chapter caused me to tear up a bit. Poor Naruto...and i'm sure when we hear Sasuke's story about his past more tears will threaten to come. It's a shame Naruto cut him off when he was about to confess his love but i understand why he did. Hopefully later on he will let him say it and return the love to him :D
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  • From solitare1 on October 30, 2007
    I am having such a good time reading your work. Keep it up!
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  • From on October 30, 2007
    Wowzers! That last chapter was pretty good! Poor Naruto! :( His past is so sad... Hurry up and make the next chapter, ne?
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 30, 2007
    I love this, more and more. Naruto's character is perfect! I love how human you've made him.
    More soon please!
    Slave
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  • From KyuubiKit on October 30, 2007
    more please.... i'm addicted. I can't wait to see if and how things resolve...eep hurry i might go into withdrawl
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  • From beekayz on October 30, 2007
    Homeschool! *__* Gah, that's just the perv in me. XD It's so hard for me to decide! Homeschooling would make for some sexy scenes but, I wonder how that would fit in Naruto's schedule? I think normal school would be fun too because it would make for some other interesting, fun scenarios. Either one would be awesome but dang, I might be leaning more towards the sexy homeschool side. XD It's all up to you miss Arashi! Whichever you have more fun writing I think would be the best choice! Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story with us loyal readers!
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