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Reviews for Dark Places

By : Asasiah
  • From ANON - mizu on September 20, 2013
    Love the story. You bring out the atmosphere of suspense very well. I'm just a bit curious, is there a way to follow a story on AFF? I just started using the site, soo...
    Anyway, looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Vesey on May 21, 2008
    I'm really diggin' this, and am would like to read more, if you have motivation left that is.
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  • From hisoka on November 08, 2007
    I FEEL BAD FOR SASUKE BUT THEN AGAIN HE ASKED FOR IT,SO I DONT KNOW WHAT TO THINK.WONDER WHAT HAPPENS NEXT HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2007
    Interesting. Slightly incoherent (Is Kimmi dead or alive?) but I suppose that everything will make more sense as you progress. Good so far.

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  • From Dragon7 on November 04, 2007
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From ANON - Meep on November 04, 2007
    Wow
    I must applaud you
    and then applaud you some more
    Normally, sex scenes are dull to read because of things like points of view and lack of writing skills
    so far the fics Ive enjoyed the most were those when there really was no sex explicity written but those who let your mind imagine everything. You, however, somehow mixed the "not write anything at all but there is aftermath and you know what happened so use your dirty mind and decide your own details" and "lets write everything in detail and not let the reader think for himself" into something most lovely and rather unexplainable
    perfect, I cant even imagine how it could've been done any better. The overal fiction was waaay too short (you cant leave us there! D:) but the cuts were right. Super right. Perfect length.
    Perfect mood and everything too
    Best sex scene Ive ever read (and mind you, Ive read a lot!) and I applaud you for it. Its an A+
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  • From ANON - Neko on November 03, 2007
    Appropriately named! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From hisoka on November 02, 2007
    INTERESTING...WHATS THIS ABOUT KYUUBI?HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on October 18, 2007
    This is insanely intriguing!!! I am very anxious to read the next chapter! Your style is exquisite. I am looking forward to an update!
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  • From Dragon7 on October 18, 2007
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From Allys on October 18, 2007
    I like it. I like how you write, very film noir XD. I'm very interested to see where this goes and hope you continue. Oh and Welcome to the Fandom XD.
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