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Reviews for Family Portrait

By : Kagenoshi
  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on November 22, 2007
    I LOVE this story. It is really well written, and is a good break from all of the PWP's that flood this site. This fic has what is important to a GOOD story....a PLOT!
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  • From himesamadakko on November 19, 2007
    awww.... please update soon!? i love it when Sasuke's a bastard, it just feels so right!!! you do know i like to make him suffer ne? anyway hope for a next great update!!!
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  • From himesamadakko on November 19, 2007
    fuck! first chapter and i'm already crying!!! fuck i can actually fucking relate, fuck! Good first chapter fuck! uhuhuhu... fuck....
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on November 03, 2007
    Sorry to hear of the injury. This is a wonderful story, but I'm an understanding person. Both of you should wait until ya'll feel better to continue.
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  • From Stacy on November 03, 2007
    i am sorry to hear about you beta. i hope she gets well soon. your story is truely awesome. the chapter before your AN i was so excited when i saw that there was another i jumped for joy. when it turned out to be an AN i wanted to cry!!!! but good things come for those who wait!! *sniff* so i will just have to wait *sniff* maybe you can send your beta some motrin(sp) to help with her pain!! the quicker the beta gets better, the quicker us loyal fans can stop crying for a new chapter!!.........i hope i did not sound rude or mean........i just really love your story!!
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  • From solitare1 on November 02, 2007
    I am sorry to hear of your loss and of your beat's injury. I how both of you feel better soon. I also am sorry to find out you really had to live through the situations in your story. No one has the right to beat their spouse in any case. I will say that I am drawn to this story and I hope to read more of it soon.

    Be Well
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  • From llyoung on October 20, 2007
    Wonderful story. You write domestic violence the way it really is. (and personally I think Sasuke is the liar instead of Orochimaru).
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  • From avila7989 on October 20, 2007
    i totaly love this fic so far. i caint wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! please update sooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Xiathan on October 20, 2007
    wow! this stroy is really good! it's hard to see gaara and naruto getting to together in it, but can't wait! and i think it's sasuke that's lying.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on October 20, 2007
    Love your story so far, was waiting for the next chapter. I love non-SasuNaru stories, especially mpregs. There aren't too many of those around unfortunately. And don't worry, I don't like Sasuke's character either. Making him an ass holds true to canon:D

    I can't wait until your next chapter, I hope it's up soon. Very, very soon *hint, hint* I want to see how long it takes for Gaara to figure out what's going on. Or Shikamaru. A genius like him should get it pretty quickly, at least, that is, if he's around to see the evidence. I can't wait to get rid of Sasuke. The sooner he's gone the better, for everyone involved. And as for who the liar is, I'd say Sasuke with only an infinitesimal amount of doubt in my mind. With the way he's been treating Naruto, I wouldn't doubt that he's been lying to him about all kinds of things.
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  • From inumoon3 on October 20, 2007
    POOR NARU-CHAN!!! Can't wait til the update...I hope Gaara helps him soon!!!!!
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  • From LadyLaran on October 20, 2007
    So far I like it. Don't worry about people who might fret over not having a Naru/Sasu pairing. Honestly, it has its moments but there's times when Sasuke just seems so polar opposite of Naruto that I can't see it happening. I enjoy Naruto/Gaara and even Naru/Shika or Shino. Although, I'm kinda twitchy about the idea of Gaara in this. Dealing? Something will have to give cause if Naruto left Sasuke and tried to take his kids, Sasuke could take the three back on the grounds of Gaara being unfit. Can't wait to see what more you'll have!
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on October 20, 2007
    That is good. Wow. your are so good. I am totally hooked WOW. I don't have the words for how great this is and how surprised I am to find this gem from it's start. Thank you sooo much for sharing this way to cool story.
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  • From akume on October 20, 2007
    If you ask me I think the liar is Sasuke. Though I could be wrong. Anyway, thanks for the update. It was awesome. Until next time. Ja.
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  • From Yuikey on October 20, 2007
    Great first Chapter!!!
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