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Reviews for Juugo's Solution

By : yaoiismyantidrug
  • From mabidiso on March 23, 2012
    That actually turned out touchingly sweet, innocent and tender. It was beautiful.
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  • From randomness on February 24, 2011
    That was really good, and yeah I'm pretty sure Juugo's eyes aren't gray but aside from that I really really enjoyed reading this, so many good things you mentioned. That Juugo's innocence and the size differences how it all made Sasuke more excited. How they stopped pretending after awhile. The whole set up of the sotry was real I liked it all and the characters were in character.
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  • From AsceticShiva on October 15, 2010
    I had never even thought about this pair before I saw this fic. But now...maybe I want more. >.> It was so achingly sweet, and I love that you gave Sasuke a heart at this point in the plotline. He always portrayed himself as so cold and uncaring. It's nice to see him actually be nice, even if he never meant for it to get that far. Excellently written! Well done!
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  • From ANON - Kira on December 26, 2008
    I have never heard of this pairing before, but I found it very cute, and sweet... in an ackward way, but still wonderful!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 23, 2008
    i adore this.It's just the hottest sweetest thing.I wish there where more.....
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2008
    (I review as you read.)

    Nice beginning. . . . Flows smoothly. I like the way Sasuke and Juugo act and react
    Nice description of actions and scene. . . . I wonder why things are getting harder with Juugo. . . . (*snicker*) “And now Suigetsu was staring, too.” XD . . . . Nice portrayal of Suigetsu. =D . . . . I didn’t see that one coming. ô.o . . . . Yup, “there it was.” =) . . . . (*snicker*) That surprised me too, Suigetsu. ^^;
    I like the short scenes in this fic. . . . Ahaha, “He had to quickly halt his train of thought.” Like, “Where did that come from?” XD . . . . Uh-oh, “nasty gleam in his eye.” Great description of it.
    This whole, er, “problem” for the story is kinda cute. And Sasuke’s so mildly calm when he’s with the Team Hebi members in the manga. I love it; I can totally see this. =) . . . . So does this mean Sasuke’s not a virgin? Who’d he do it with? õ_ô . . . . What is Suigetsu playing at? Õ_õ . . . . Wow. Is Juugo agitated because of his crush, and the fighting is what’s setting him off so easily? . . . . I guess the fall jarred him. . . . (*after reading Suigetsu’s line*) Dumbass. ¬_¬ . . . . Must be tiring for Sasuke, trying to be everyone’s mother in this. ^^ . . . . Oh, that’s cool, Sasuke knows some general healing. ô_ô . . . . I guess that kind of healing would hurt somewhat. . . . Aww. “Unsure why he felt the need to do so.” Cuz Juugo’s cuuuuuute. ♥ . . . . This story is kind of sweet, actually. . . . (*shiver*) I get the feeling that Karin comes off as creepy when she tries to be cute.
    . . . Don’t have much to say yet, except that the scene with these two just sitting there is kind of neat. . . . (?) Interesting, Sasuke’s italicized thought. . . . “I’ll figure something else out.” Heh. That’s easy for him to say. . . . I like the repeated, “This felt good”s; I can visualize Sasuke slowly relaxing. . . . Is . . . is Sasuke thinking about Naruto? (God, I hope so.) . . . . “Exposed collarbones,” (!!) (I’ve got a collarbone fetish. >_>) . . . . Er, might want to put a little more thought into your positioning, Sasuke. (*sweat*blush*) . . . . Heheh, this is why there should be more Juugo/Sasuke out there. ♥ . . . . Love Sasuke’s sudden passion. The whole scene just went slo~w~ly and sen~su~al~ly ♥, and then all of a sudden, flash! Sasuke’s kissing him back passionately. Love it. ♥ . . . . LOVE these paragraphs: “Sasuke kept his eyes open [. . .] had never done this before, either.” I really like how he’s wondering about whether this is “normal.” And . . . oh, I just think they’re excellent paragraphs. =D . . . . Careful, Sasuke, Juugo’s head might still be tender. . . . Verrrry nice description. That’s what I call “erotic.” (None of that crap I find in the bookstores.) . . . . Awesome progression. . . . “Anticipation” is right. I like how this kind of drags out. The longer the better, I think. . . . Wait, this sentence caught my attention: “Sasuke was pretending he was someone else, too [. . .] before he was truly ready.” Does . . . does that mean . . . what does that mean? I’m confused. I seriously love the line, but I’m not sure what it’s hinting at. õ_õ . . . . M-man, this is . . . (*blush*) . . . . (!) He said “Sasuke.” Does this mean he quit pretending? . . . . Oh jeez, the fantasies! Õ.Õ . . . . (*giggle*) “Better?” Uh, yeah. ^^;;;
    O.O “Every . . . single . . . time?” T-th-that ending . . . startling for some reason!

    Gray eyes . . . those’re pretty.
    This is going on my list, of course! ^_^
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  • From ANON - blisblop on March 12, 2008
    Very clever, very hot.Gee who is Sasuke thinking of, but I'm glad they saw each other, heck,,,,why not go all the way?A bit of a tease.Slick, unusual. I like muchly.
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on October 17, 2007
    This fic was very nice and very well written. Is this just a one shot, or will there be more? It is the first fic I have read with this couple, but it is one that I was thinking about doing myself. Keep up the good work.
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  • From heardtheowl on October 16, 2007
    God, this fic is soo hott. I just read it again, for the second time, and noticing such a small number of reviews for such a wonderfully written story, thought I should do something about that. Thanks so much for the story!
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  • From LindyStar on October 16, 2007
    'It worked every single time'

    O-o gyaaaaahhh! squeeeeeee!

    That was OMG great! A bit of Sasuke angst mixed in but enough fluff to quell the bitterness. Nice.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on October 15, 2007
    Wow. That was really well written- and very very steamy. I never even concidered this pairing before but it's sooo cute!!

    Awesome job~
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  • From inediblefrogs on October 15, 2007
    Ohhh... Sweet, sweet frot. My favorite! (One of my favorites... =D) I love Juugo's gentleness, and how Sasuke's the one to bring that gentleness out of him- just like he's the only one who can tame Juugo's rages. A crush! ^__^

    I hope you get bitten by the Team Hebi bug again (no pressure). Siugetsu needs some lovin' (or at least a chance to say more hilarious lines). I *love* this one.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 15, 2007
    Nicely done
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  • From JCooper on October 15, 2007
    This fic was hot and lovely. Not only is it JUUGOxSASUKE, but the way you write Suigetsu was absolutely fabulous. I think I spent the entire fic either squeeing or fanning myself. The way Juugo and Sasuke both admit that it started because they reminded each other of someone else and yet they continued it of their own choice was great. I absolutely love how you write Team Hebi. I hope to be seeing more from you in the future.

    The last line made me snicker so much.

    Actually, Juugo's eyes are red/brown/orange (kind of like how hazel eyes are brown and green mixed together). I got this from someone's deviantart page because they redrew the cover of volume 39 here: http://sharingandevil.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-vol-39-lineart-vector-61443826
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  • From ANON - VanityWantsYou on October 15, 2007
    I LOVED it. I love the way you write and I loved the interaction between Sasuke and Juugo in the very beginning. I could picture it and I have to say you're the first author to actually make such a clear picture in my mind. Thanks for writing such a lovely fic.
    ~Vanity
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