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Reviews for Forest Magic

By : Nanaka
  • From ANON - Kang on September 09, 2008
    Hey, that was a good lemon! Especially for a person who's new at them. :) I must say I'm getting very curious as to why Naruto can't visit Sasuke's home. And what about Naruto? Does he live in a cave or something? or does he have a real home and perhaps a family?
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  • From ANON - Kang on September 09, 2008
    Good job! I am enjoying your story ver much. :) It has a fun fairy tale feel to it. You should double che3ck your work for typos--there were a few places you mixed up things like "they're/their" but overall it was pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Knid on January 14, 2008
    All of Mercedes Lackey's music is available through Firebird Arts and Music at www.firebirdarts.com. Snow Magic is on the Freedom, Flight & Fantasy CD and they also have it available as an MP3.
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  • From ANON - kinkou on December 19, 2007
    You can look under Lamas Night. I dimmly remember seeing a copy of the song in there. And the song itself was in a duet with Leslie. I have the copy in some old filk i have from a con.
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  • From shadowsonata on December 18, 2007
    You know what? I loved this story because it was soo cliche and simply. It reminded me of a fairy tale. I'm sure there are some people that are trying to bash this fic; but, don't listen to them. Everyone has their style of writing and this so happen to be yours. Maya Angelou's works were often harshly critized when she first started writing and look at her now. So, good job! Learn from this fic and just keep improving.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2007
    ooooh im loving this! especially the song referances~ quite compelling
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on December 12, 2007
    Now im sad. Man poor sasuke can't ever be happy not to mention poor naruto. Oh well can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon. :P
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  • From serenagold on December 12, 2007
    awwww :(
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  • From spoon10488 on December 12, 2007
    Waaaaaaaaa! That was so sad. I love this story! *bursts into tears again* Waaaaa! I hope it has a happy ending. Please update soon!
    =)
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  • From Chria on December 12, 2007
    This took a while but it really grew on me a lot. I'm loving the folklore style of it and the song ficish parts at the bottom. The latest chapter is the best one you've written. It convened emotion best. The imagery in it was sweet too. I can imagine Naruto kicking ass and how heart broken they both are now. Much love to every word~
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  • From serenagold on December 10, 2007
    ooooo... I hope Sasuke doesn't freak out. :(

    (I love poetry at the end of these chapters, btw. Are they from something or are you making them up?)
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  • From AJAngelique on December 09, 2007
    omgomgomgomg! how is sasuke going to react to this?
    what are they going to do with the bodies?

    dear bob, my lover just killed my bastard brother and all his buddies, what should we do with the bodies?
    well joan, one word comes to mind. BAR-B-Q!
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on December 09, 2007
    Oh yeah!! killer Sun fox. great the plot thickens. Can't wait for more.
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  • From spoon10488 on December 05, 2007
    I really like your story. It has a different spin to it then the others I've read. Good job can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From on December 05, 2007
    This story is beginning to intrigue me, I can't wait to read more.
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