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Reviews for Wide of the Mark

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2007
    Update! This is getting good.
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  • From ANON - unknownthreat???@ on October 16, 2007
    hi me again, just read the 3th chapter and i through it was wonderful, cant wait to read the next and i cant wait to find out how Nejis going to find out sasukes going to be his new wife. REALLY CANT WAIT, PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON!
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  • From antilogicgirl on October 16, 2007
    Ah...an anti-fangirl story with attitude. Jumping in after chapter 3 with my first review, I have to say that it is an enjoyable read. There are plenty of snippy one-liners from Sasuke, which are oh so fun. Not sure how he's going to handle the situation when he finds out what Hiashi whispered to the servant...but! Well done, nicely written, with very few errors. Great job.
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  • From Dragon7 on October 15, 2007
    I Love it chapter 3 was great and I know chapter 4 will be even better so update soon.

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  • From nwalmaer on October 14, 2007
    *snickers* It figures that Sasuke would turn out to be the 'perfect choice' by NOT trying to impress [for once. heh] I love the fact that he's so selfpossessed even when being assessed by Hiashi in a WTF-situation [YAY. IC-NESS!] and waitaminute; is that Naruto I spy as the blonde chick or what o.O?

    Anyhow, I can't see Neji happy about having a strange *cough* girl foisted off on him [caged bird issues anyone?] and TEH HAWT SEXXORS anticipation aside I eagerly await THAT little confrontation, not to mention how/why Sasuke's going to go through with it [clan reasons? he gets stuck in the jutsu? gets blackmailed/another curse seal slapped onto him?]

    Question: why's Hiashi rounding up the cattle, I mean cows, er girls anyway, when he could just get a random clansperson...or is it something to do with preserving the bloodline? [Have I just answered my own question?_? and sorry if you already answered this - I'm halfasleep...again -.-']

    So, yeah, love your Sasuke [silly boy - to get rid of the fangirls just embrace your sexuality and get yourself a possessive boyfriend, though that might mean yaoi-fangirl Sakura following you around it can't get any worse, right? ;P] and Hiashi = O_O parent material as usual. Would love to see the other kooky Hyugas at some point and - OH! Was the blonde chica Naruto visiting Hinata in disguise 'cause that would be *LOL* the win :D

    Will stop rambling now...like *now*

    - Sleepy
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  • From Telpei on October 12, 2007
    Ahahahahahaha!!!! That's friggin priceless. Poor Sasuke, he just can't get a break. And of course once he was on the cart he couldn't blow his cover...his disguise seems to be working and he wouldn't want those devils - er, girls, to find out about it so soon. *giggle* I can't wait to see Neji's reaction when he finds out, and how Sasuke will deal with it. I'm usually a sasunaru fan, but you've definitely caught my interest with this one! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - DangoLover139 on October 12, 2007
    You have to write more this is awesome. I will be forced to cyberly maul you if you don't. I am quite serious.
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  • From riddlestar on October 12, 2007
    aww..the chapters are too short! update soon~
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  • From ANON - unknownthreat???@ on October 12, 2007
    just finished the 2nd chapter and its great,
    PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 11, 2007
    Oh, this has the potential to be hysterical!! I think though that if you changed the summary a bit you might get more readers. Something like a henge gone terribly wrong???
    Hope I haven't offended you.
    Slave
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  • From Dragon7 on October 11, 2007
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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  • From ANON - unkownthreat???@ on October 11, 2007
    this is very intersting, cant wait to read the next chapter.
    please write it soon.
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  • From ANON - Carmilla Dulac on October 11, 2007
    Keep it coming!!! I like where this is going. It's so hard to find NejiSasu stories =)
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  • From Dragon7 on October 10, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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