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Reviews for Master Of Puppets

By : RavenShantor
  • From ANON - Naye on October 11, 2007
    Interesting team lineups you created. I am looking forward to seeing how they turn out. Sasori was killed....damn that Snake bastard Orochi-Jackson! Oh yeah, "Pocky" is the correct spelling of the sweet treat :-). Also, if you are not going for a hentai pairing and you are going for a yaoi pairing, how about Naruto/Shino or Naruto/Neji? Hell, I would love a threesome with either of those two boys and Hinata in the middle, but please do not do Naruto and Sasuke. Not only is it overdone, but come on, that pairing sucks ass and they don't mesh well at all.
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  • From ANON - D on October 11, 2007
    Well this was an enjoyable chapter. I like how you cleared up the fact concerning Akatsuki and Sasori for
    people. As for how Naruto progressed under Sasori, the fact of the matter is, that if anyone had done that
    then Naruto would have progressed just as much (but they didn't and now it's coming to bite them in their ass).
    As for Naruto with his Human Puppets, I wonder when he will use them. I'm surprised Sasuke wasn't being all
    boasting in the Academy about his skill being superior to everyone else's. Also I'm wondering if Naruto
    demonstrated any of his abilities in class or not.

    As for the different teams, I have one thing to say, good for you. Some people write the teams to be the same
    as the original teams were and give no explanation as to why that is (even though with how they've made people
    train and learn, the original Team 7, 8, and 10 are no longer balanced for power concerning rankings). Some
    write it the same so that it is easier on them (and give the reason of Sakura being weak, but the fact is it
    was her brains that caused her to be put on Team 7 since Naruto has his strength and stamina), others at least
    try using the role system (which is usually the most believeable reason if they don't change the teams with a
    stronger/smarter Naruto). So I hope these teams work out for you (it'd be funny if Team 7 failed because of
    Sasuke, just think of the uproar the Council would be in, and yet the ninja clans would support Kakashi's
    report, especially if it mentioned about Shino and Shikamaru trying to work with him and also helping him when
    he needs it). After all it can give a reason to have Naruto dislike Sasuke, due to the Council trying to make
    sure Sasuke is a genin (since he has such a lone wolf attitude, I say it'd only be fair if Shino and Shikamaru
    with Kakashi's permission do a couple of d-ranks on their own while Sasuke does the same, since he thinks a
    team is of no use to him). After all I wouldn't doubt they'd get him passed somehow (even though no one seems
    to clue in on how big his problem is with his brother).

    As for any possible pairing, and I'd expect it'd take a few years to show up, I say to go with Naruto x Hinata.
    A funny request that Naruto could make to Sarutobi, is concerning what happens to his body when he dies. Just
    think about it, someone asking if they can have your body once you die.

    As for how Naruto will fight, I agree on the fact that by using his brains more, he won't need to use his
    techniques as much. But I can still see him learning new techniques (besides Rasengan or Summoning), that are
    either concealment/diversion types (the hidden in the mist technique is a concealment and the grand fireball
    of Sasuke's is a diversion/offence type), plus techniques that are defensive and/or offensive in nature.
    Although for Naruto and how he is, I can see the techniques mainly falling under the concealment/diversion and
    defensive categories (since a defense helps protect the puppeteer).

    Poor Asuma when he sees Naruto's Kyuubi puppet. Also a question just how badly damaged was Sasori and his cave.
    Depending on the amount of damage to the cave, Naruto either would have gotten more scrolls (considering
    everything that was in there), the cave was sealed until he gets there or it was destroyed. As for Sasori
    himself, depending on what remained and since Naruto knows the theory behind Human Puppets, he might be able
    to rebuild Sasori (at least if his heart plug was still in one piece).

    Anyways keep up the good work.
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  • From Kilrath on October 11, 2007
    Nice second chapter, i can't wait to see more of this.
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  • From Razgriz1 on October 11, 2007
    Hehe, I kinda like how this story is coming out I was all bummed out when I finished the first chapter ^^;; But keep up the good work it's something new for Naruto stories but still I like the idea of Naruto of being a Puppet Master, I never would have thought of this type of story, Unfortunately I have no writing skills at all which makes me sad when I read some good stories.
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  • From ANON - Naye on October 10, 2007
    Very well done on this first chapter! I hope Naruto gets paired with Hinata if this is a hentai fic.
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  • From Kilrath on October 10, 2007
    I enjoyed the way you started this story since it is a fairly original concept and it was well written.
    As far as who the human puppets could be i could se itachi as a puppet much later in the series, though that would really piss off Sasuke.
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