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Reviews for Master Of Puppets

By : RavenShantor
  • From ANON - dustin on April 27, 2009
    first off, let me tell you how awesome your story is. second....UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (>0
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    This is freaking exelent hope you update soon
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  • From ultistarmon on December 08, 2007
    This is interesting!!! I've just started reading Naruto fan fiction and your story was one of the first I came across. I really like this story and would like to see more.
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  • From TheFifthRiderofArmageddon on December 01, 2007
    This is very good you should make Chuckie the killer doll into a puppet.

    And for the pairing...it ahould be Hinata and Haku.
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  • From SamZelRavSmash on November 28, 2007
    Nicely done. Good puppeteer Naruto stories are so hard to find these days.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on November 05, 2007
    I like the story but how did Orochimaru kill Sasori. And why did you change the story so much that it feels a bit foreign to me right now... Sasuke gets saved by Naruto and he sent 6 of his puppets after him and he didn't get poisoned by his clones interesting but what is going to happen now...... Keep on writing its new but interesting none the less
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  • From Dynamo on November 04, 2007
    ooo great chapters, sorry i havent reviewed in a while but ive been moving to a new house and just got internet back :3 it alreadyt feels like home. anyways i cat nt wait to see naruto in the prelims and finals! please please update soon!
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  • From Kaara12 on November 02, 2007
    I LOVE IT WHEN ITS LONG!!!!
    Please hurry and update.This is the best story and i mean BEST story since People that Are Important by XoXgaaraXoX
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  • From Dynamo on October 25, 2007
    ooo great chapter! i wonder what part haku will play in the story :O
    update soon! JaaNee
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  • From lordlamson on October 25, 2007
    very excelent fic keep up the wgood wok on it
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  • From ANON - D on October 15, 2007
    Well this chapter was pretty good as well. I can understand Asuma's revulsion at first to Naruto's puppets but
    then again Naruto is Konoha's first puppetteer. After all while Suna was originally disturbed by Sasori's
    Human Puppets, they did acknowledge their strength and usefulness in battle.

    As for pairings, I have to agree with you. Putting a pairing in a story and if it doesn't work with the plot,
    then it's not necessarily worth it. Now if it affects how the plot goes minorly (good or bad), you can stick a
    relationship in but just not refer to it too often (since that would be material that happens when they have
    down time and can be together).

    Now for Asuma's team, considering they're the combat team of the bunch, they will most likely learn very
    effective jutsus to cause damage on either a wide-scale or limited area devastation depending on the situation.
    As for Naruto, Asuma will just point out the fact that there will be times when Naruto is unable to use a puppet, and he'll need other methods of dealing with opponents.

    As for another villian, why not use Pain of Akatsuki and Hidden Rain (make them wanting everyone else to
    suffer like Hidden Rain has since they were the usual battleground between shinobi countries).

    Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
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  • From serenagold on October 12, 2007
    I like your set-up. I can't wait to see where you go with this. :)
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  • From Dynamo on October 12, 2007
    after reading the other reviews i just wanted to say, ignore bonerboy. take the progression at your own pace. personaly i could care less about the absence of or inclusion of hentai, as long as the story lives and breathes ^^
    well, JaaNee
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  • From Dynamo on October 12, 2007
    WOOO this story is GOOD! i cant wait to see naruto's strategy in action. i also cant wait to see what human pupets he makes. also is this going to follow the general storyline, you know with the whole zabuza/haku mission and what not>?

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  • From ANON - bonerboy on October 11, 2007
    put some porn in it!! your basicly in a porn site so up the lemons lol
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