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Reviews for To be with you

By : MoveThemHands
  • From basilika on October 16, 2007
    lovely and emotional. good work!
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  • From ANON - Smut Muse! on October 11, 2007
    OMG I knew I was missing part of my life when I became to busy to read! I missed you! Omg This story actually made me want to cry! Seriously! That was so freaking adorable!Oh SQUEE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aice on October 11, 2007
    The part where Naruto caught Sasuke from colapsed is so sweet.
    It's like he can read Sasuke mind, need and movement.

    How I wish I can walk into the Dobe in the shower and shaking his butt. *nosebleed*


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  • From minaaaaaaaa on October 10, 2007
    aawww i really liked it, esp the end. i thought sas was gonna die or something :S
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  • From ANON - 123 on October 10, 2007
    So well done and I loved how you balenced out the character's nature Naruto wasn't to feminine and Sasuke wasn't to manly
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  • From anndragera007 on October 10, 2007
    nice and very well done - the last 5 stories i have read (tried to read) were either lame, boring or poorly done. this one was very well put together and had a nice flow to it. liked the ending best!

    may i make ask if you have ever read my story 'happy birthday'? i think you might like it - though it is 6 chapters long it is complete.

    keep up the good writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2007
    cute as hell! XD good work!!
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  • From ANON - fangirl on October 10, 2007
    Awww! That was so sweet. Sniffle. I thought it was great that you made it a birthday fic. So, where's that picture that inspired the story?
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  • From MissMayumi on October 10, 2007
    xD! This was cute, I loved it!! The sex was yummie~~

    ♥
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  • From despairs on October 10, 2007
    So sweet...i love it. You never disappoint with any of your stories, even the ones you write quickly turn out wonderful.

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  • From yaoigurl06 on October 10, 2007
    *drools* I'm sooo glad I cracked the whip on you...If you keep making smut like that I'll have to crack the whip more often!!! XD
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  • From LadyRonin on October 10, 2007
    no it wasn't crappy in it's quickness it was cute. at first i thought it was going to have sasuke have a last screw before he died so making him just pressed to be with naruto for his birthday was a beautiful ending.
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