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Reviews for Kiba's Private Hell

By : Rainbow
  • From animeluvr on April 28, 2008
    Hi! I do hope and pray that you will not abandon this story, I've really enjoyed it so far!!
    Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on March 08, 2008
    hi,

    like it, Why did you stopped it there! T_T, shif snif. chap 4 and 5 are the same. Is there more coming, this is the first time KxK story I read. When Kiba is in heat, I love it (behavoiur modification: dominating, slutty, begging, aggressive, bitchy. Although, I think Kiba is a uke). Well, will see with youre story. Keep the good work.

    read you later
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  • From animeluvr on November 27, 2007
    Awww!! I hate waiting!! When is the next chapter going up????
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  • From cynaga on November 26, 2007
    I love this story but...


    * There was no transition from Choji sitting on Kiba's chest to running after Kakashi
    * Lots of misspells and words left out here and there
    * Ch 4 & 5 are the same!

    I love your creativity - YOU NEED A BETA BABY!


    I want more!!!! Please fix and continue...
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  • From animeluvr on November 06, 2007
    I looooove your story, please don't leave me waiting too long for next chappie!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on October 27, 2007
    Very good. This story just gets better
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on October 27, 2007
    Awesome story! I enjoyed it so much! I cant wait for more! XD
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on October 14, 2007
    Oh, this is going to be fun. I wonder why anybody but Kiba? What must never happen again? I sense a history here. Update soon and thank you.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 10, 2007
    Hi- just wanted to say I really enjoyed this!! Write more soon.!
    Slave
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  • From katsuyo on October 10, 2007
    LOL...

    It's not half bad. It will be interesting to see how your story develops as you add more chapters, since I get the impression this is not going to be a one shot.

    One small word of advice - be consistent in terms of key plot facts as you work on this. I find doing a quick pre read of the previous chapters or having the basic story breakdown list on hand, helps tremendously in terms of the story quality.

    A story break down list is essentially a bare bones plot list of what you plan on doing with your story. Yes - plots change all the time but having something down to refer to - helps you keep on the right track and prevents you from losing a great idea. If you plan on making a change in your plot - put the change down on the list.

    Keep an eye on grammar and don't be afraid to give the rough draft to your friends to read and offer suggestions to improve the story.

    The best suggestion I can make to you as a writer is to have fun with this... and don't let reader's criticisms upset you too much. Not everyone will have good things to say... it's just the nature of the beast.

    Good luck!

    sincerely,

    katsuyo
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  • From ANON - Jien on October 10, 2007
    update soon, i really like it. it's very interesting
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  • From llyoung on October 09, 2007
    I love the idea of Kiba (and Akamaru) being in heat. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - yoai_lover1 on October 09, 2007
    i really like it make more
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