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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - lo on October 16, 2007
    Nicely done, the tension is still mounting and the characterization is wonderful.
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  • From despairs on October 16, 2007
    This just keeps getting better and better.
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  • From Kimra on October 16, 2007
    wisker marks. your so awesome I didn't even realise that's what you where doing for a while. then it clicked. the shift key is too far away so you get not capitals in this reveiw. :)
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  • From llyoung on October 16, 2007
    Still love the way that Naruto will mumble one thing and then tell Sasuke that he actually said something else. Also loved the "anal" conversation.
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  • From ANON - happyme on October 16, 2007
    This is a really good beginning. =) I love the way you seem to paint pictures with your words. uppdate soon.
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  • From gaara89 on October 16, 2007
    can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Bluesake on October 16, 2007
    I love naruto's little comments and than changing them. xD Good chapter can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - totaltruth on October 15, 2007
    This sounds like another great story. I like the concept so far, it reminds me of a book I read a while ago.
    Anyway, I'm happy to see more of your work!
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  • From Inuzuka on October 13, 2007
    While I wouldn't call it the most original work -- it has it's cliches -- nobody reads fanfiction (works that inherently use established personalities) for originality, and you've definitely caught my interest. I'm enjoying your writing, your dialogue, and your plot, and I'm an appreciative reader, especially for a second chapter.

    Great job. :)
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  • From Telpei on October 13, 2007
    Hahaha!! I love this story already!! :D I love the way Sasuke and Naruto keep bickering, it seems so perfect. And I also get the giggles everytime Sasuke had to ask "what was that?" and Naruto would rephrase his 'insult'. Too funny!! I love it :) I can't wait to see how this develops. Suriviving with each other will definitely be a lot... ~harder~ than surviving the crash, I bet! ^_~

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - lonelydove on October 13, 2007
    ooooo...me likes me likes ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From gaara89 on October 12, 2007
    very nicely done. please do continue soon.
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  • From Mikra on October 12, 2007
    Oh, I love this already :)
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  • From animeaddict666 on October 12, 2007
    Oh MAN! This is sooooo good. I can't wait for the next installment. I fly planes, too, so seeing a story like this is just great. You did the tension justice without over exaggerating or over-explaining. PERFECT!!!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on October 11, 2007
    Yay! Another story from you! This one sounds very interesting! :)
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