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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Taylor on October 30, 2007
    Oh man. When I got to the end of the chapter, I literally said: "Nooo!" outloud. XD lol

    Anyway, this fic is nothing short of gripping. I'm totally engrossed in it, and I cant wait for the next chapter. ^_^
    Keep up the awesome job.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 30, 2007
    Oh, that was fabu!!!! and if I hadn't mentioned it before, I love the title. The double entandre (sp?) is great. I think all your stories are great. oh, I used that word. They're wonderful. There, see, I can do it, I'm not completely mute at your wonderful story. Can't wait for the next update
    Slave
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  • From Kerrisa on October 30, 2007
    HURRAY For Fanfics by Zrina-sama!!! I've always been curious about what would happen to survivors on a plane crash >_> I love riding in planes! Even though those 6 hour flights to New York can get tiresome and not as enjoyable. What inspired you to create this kind of fic? I enjoy it lots!! As i've enjoyed all your works so far. You write at such a high level, makes me want to get a hold of your works from when you started out writing =D You wouldn't by any chance have some of those said works posted anywhere.. would you o.O? How awesome it would be if you did!! Well i just started reading this fic today, so i'm pretty excited for the chapters to come. I thought that whole taking-advantage-of-a-sleeping-Naruto scene earlier was freaking hot. I can't wait for them to finally get around to addressing it xD Keep up the fantabulous work! =D
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  • From Bluesake on October 30, 2007
    yay i cant wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on October 21, 2007
    This is so funny. So Sasuke has been secretly sneeking in to listen to what Naruto had to say...how funny.

    I look forward to next update.
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on October 19, 2007
    I just found this story and I had to comment. I was laughing all the way through both chapters, especially when Naruto mumbled under his breath. How in the world did you come up with all of those things that sounds like what the had said? I could never in my life do something like that. Great story!
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  • From ANON - Taylor on October 18, 2007
    An experience like this will definitely bring two people together.
    Amazing job so far.
    I cant wait for the next chapter.
    Keep up the awesome work!
    *high five*
    :3

    twistedneko@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - hina88 on October 18, 2007
    I thought I'd reviewed the 2nd chp. ... but apparently I hadn't - so sorry for the lateness. Now - where to begin *grins evilly*

    "Be a little more careful with my luggage"...? Sasuke *stares* you're worse than a woman Uchiha! Loved how he started to panic when Naruto took so long though... cause he got a little lost. Aww Naturo! *glomps* Heh and Sasuke was eye f***ing every inch of Naruto's skin *snicker* he really was XD

    I love that Naruto's always making those muttered comments my favorite was 'Take it or leave it.' which then switched to 'I said I wouldn't fake it, believe it!' that was just brilliant LOL I burst out laughing and my cousin gave me a dodgy look (pretty common really). I also liked the way they'd just both catch themselves staring at the other and then sort of jerked them selfs back into safer ground XD and when Naruto fell asleep against Sasuke... *sigh* sweet.

    This is great but then you don't need me to tell you that. And obviously I can't wait for the next installment, thanks for this ;)

    hina xXxx

    p.ss almost forgot! “Maybe I like anal-” favorite line from second chapter!!! Definitely!!!
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  • From roro237 on October 18, 2007
    Zrina! I love it!!! Where do your ideas flow from?!:)I'm riveted to my seat with each one of your stories. This one is no exception:) Your self proclaim number one yaoi fangirl reader loves this story too:) The way Naruto talks under his breath and repeats something else to Sasuke that sounds like it is great,I'm cracking up as I read that. Oh yea I love the title too.(as my mind wonders into the gutter):)
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  • From ANON - Clueless on October 18, 2007
    NOOOOO don't stop there!! more more...awww...sobz the chapter had to end sometime sobz. but please continue with the story!! :D
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  • From Inuzuka on October 17, 2007
    Lol, you know, you don't HAVE to go FULL THROTTLE with the innuendo and foreshadowing of teh buttsex. It's on a glorified porn site, for crissakes. WE KNOW THERE WILL BE THE SEX. ;)

    It did bring a smile to my face, however. You're doing a very good job. :)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on October 17, 2007
    Thanks for the new chapter, Zrina! The part with them arguing while Naruto was getting his face stitched up was funny but he's lucky he didn't get worse damage from all the moving around and laughing. :D
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  • From Adi on October 17, 2007
    My smexiest author of all authors! I AM SO SORRY FOR NOT READING THIS SOONER! But I printed it off and read it on my journey and every now and again I'd glance up to see people giving me weird looks, wanna know why? BECAUSE I WAS SMIRKING AT THE PIECES OF PAPER IN MY HANDS

    oh it was so damn funny, "anally rententive* XD oh god, I actually let out a snicker and I got the most reproving look XD

    The stitches made me wince and want Sasuke to kiss at the hurt so badly, I so love how you build up the tension in these fics and that theres some background feelings and theres a deeper meaning to it.

    and gah I'm so glad you're writing more, I won't stop trying to make you write more either, SoD got up to 73 and thats pretty damn close to 75 XD!

    You wrote their interactions so well, and it always comes to life for me when I read your fics, and just wonderfully written in general

    *hearts you* again, I suck for not reading it sooner :( BUT I LOVE IT!!!


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2007
    This is so wonderful. :) I love how Naruto keeps mumblings things, then making something up when Sasuke asks, ahah. Brilliant! ^^

    They're shmexy!~~ Can't wait to see what happens next, teehee.
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  • From Allys on October 16, 2007
    Aww, that was actually really sweet coming down to the end there XD. Other than that the chapter was hilarious XD *snickers* "I like anal" XD, I bet you do XD. I was cracking the hell up, the whole time XD. But my absolute favourite funny moment was - “I said I wouldn’t fake it! Believe it!” LMAO!! XD, That was Priceless, absolute A+++ material XD. I also love the fact that Sasuke is so freaking clueless in his snobbiness 0.o;; He really didn't realise that Naruto was insulting hima nd that's why the comments never matched XD. It just makes him even cuter, cause he's so innocent about it. All snobs should be innocent about it, otherwise they're just obnoxious. I also love how neither one of them has a clue that the other is crushing. Or at least fascinated. Naruto's thoughts running away with him was fun, LOL, I can't wait to see how they wake up tomorrow morning XD. I also really like that the whisker marks came from this and that Sasuke stitched them up neatly. That's almost worse than tattooing Sasuke's name on his body. Every time he looks in the mirror he'll think about him. It's awfully romantic. Awfully cause it's sort of scary as hell at the same time. That's really permanent. Sasuke shouldn't be able to come out of this unscathed, Naruto shouldn't be the only one, but then XD, I suppose coming out of it head over heels in love will work XD. And I think Sasuke would be a kisser. Mr. watching from afar, he's got it bad. LOL, never mind he's already scathed and he doesn't even know it *sighs in happiness* Thank you lovey. I'm really enjoying this story ♥.
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