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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From hisoka on November 01, 2007
    WHO ACTUALLY REACTS THAT WAY(LIKE NARUTO DID WITH THE MORNING...INSIDENT)?THIS IS CRAZY WHO DOES KEEP THEIR CELL PHONE IN THIER SUITCASE,THATS WHY IT SHOULD ALWAYS BE IN YOUR POCKET PLUS PEOPLE STEAL FROM YOUR BELONGINGS EVEN IF YOU DONT KNOW THEY DO GO THROUGH THEM.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Clueless on November 01, 2007
    ooooooooooo oooooooooooo this made my day!!!
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  • From bloodstone on October 31, 2007
    Love the story. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2007
    I really enjoy reading this story! I hope you find time to update it soon, its seems i go through a 'drought' of good stories, and then all my favourites update at once! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Trollmia on October 31, 2007
    *snickers* Sasuke you little pervert... do that to Naruto while he's sleeping in your lap. Good chapter as always. I was so glad to find this to read with my morning coffee, really made my day :)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on October 30, 2007
    Thanks for the new chapter!! Good to see they are getting along better, somewhat. :D
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  • From gaara89 on October 30, 2007
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From tovah on October 30, 2007
    This latest chapter was pure gold. I love Sasuke's little molestation of Naruto, it was very, very smexy. Keep up the good work, I am looking forward to the rest of this story.
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  • From roro237 on October 30, 2007
    This was goood! I loved it when Naruto was sleep in Sasuke lap and that mouth open and nibble!(oh my) It doesn't get much hot than that:) I'm so happy to read Tuesday is still the update day. Now my work week can go back to Monday Zrinaday Wesdenday Thursday Friday:)
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  • From despairs on October 30, 2007
    The beginning of the new chapter wasnt a lemon but it may as well have been....it was hot! If your non-lemons are this good, i surely can not wait 'til i read the real lemon lol. *pants* oh yeah, very good. Sooo looking forward to them kissing and groping and all that yummy stuff :P

    Oh and i like how Naruto didnt confront Sasuke about what happened, he handled it very well.
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  • From ringpop on October 30, 2007
    NEXT!!! You're doing a great job! love the inner thoughts! & additudes!
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  • From Adi on October 30, 2007
    *squishes the fic that belongs entirely to her* :D

    Ok the beginning scene was too hot for words. Seriously. Sasuke trying to mouth rape half asleep Naruto had me opening and closing my mouth... *fish impression* However, it seemed like he didn’t really need to as his slowly swelling cock filled the scant space between fabric and flesh and was soon practically pressing itself against Naruto’s lips. *whimpers* Sasuke watched in a daze as his own hand betrayed him by gently cupping the pilot at the nape of his neck and edging him to close that short distance. I LOVED IT WHEN UCHIHA BASTARD DID THAT! No I don't like you Naruto, but I want to steal a blow job from you and mouth rape you as you sleep XD Naruto's reaction to it though... *snickers*

    *dances for the mouth rape* oh and the doughnuts!! AND ARGH! THE UST!!! I love the UST because I know it'll be resolved, but at the same time I can't help the tension that builds up instead my head thats screaming at you to make them kiss XD Naruto defending himself had me cheering, it was alternate words of "punch him" and "kiss him" running around in my head.

    Your fics always show more than the 2D characters that they are sometimes in the anime, Sasuke has another side of him and its sweet when its forced to be exposed (on death of Naruto punching him in the mouth)

    KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS KISS

    Adi wants KISSING! XD ok you have permission to hit me now -__-
    love you!

    Adi XX
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  • From animeaddict666 on October 30, 2007
    Oh man. The temptation! New way to look at morning wood! This is going to be so hot when they get it on. The setting and the characterization are perfect so far! *worships*
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  • From Kimra on October 30, 2007
    Yay. I dispared, really I did. Because you update on Tuesdays but it's American Tuesdays and I get confused sometimes and forget the rest of the world is slower than us here in Australia. So I dispared because you hadn't updated on Sat/Sun and you hadn't updated on Tuesday. But low and behold you have updated and I am no longer 1. concerned for your awesome well being, or 2. concerned for the well being of awesome stories.

    Anyway. I love this story and am still enjoying it. All my head can think is 'yay cock nibbles' and I'm sure that's the wrong thing to think... but well I've written it down now. No going into politics for me... way too many bad words on the net to be traced back to me!

    Cheers!
    Kimra
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  • From Allys on October 30, 2007
    Awwww... Sasuke is so cute in this. He's like a five-year-old. I like you and it's weird, so I'm going to pull your hair for making me feel weird. Omg speaking of hair... that little episode at the beginning XD. Hehehe Good Instincts Naruto!! LOL. And Sasuke what a perv *huggles him*. Actually he seems really innocent, (poor baby). When was the last time, if ever, that he got laid?? Oh well, I'll leave that problem in your and Naruto's very very capable hands XD. Their food and rescue issues are worrisome. If Sasuke's gonna keep on being picky about sweet things he's gonna get real hungry real soon. Naruto can give him something salt to snack on... ... *headdesk* Oh god, I have sex on the brain. Ignore me. I'm really happy about the new arrangement. I can live with something new every Tuesday *hugs u*. Thank you so much for the update, I'm already addicted to this story. :), or maybe I'm just addicted to you *chuu*.
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