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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From gaara89 on November 13, 2007
    OMG! That was hawt!!!!
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  • From Mignonne422 on November 13, 2007
    I'm reviewing this everywhere!

    I consider this doing my fangirl duty and showing you the love you deserve for being the wonderful genius goddess of fanfic that you are! So, LOVE!!

    My LJ review is more extensive, but seriously, LOOOVED IT!

    Hot and sexy and extra brownie points for completly confused Sasuke. He's the best!

    Hee hee.

    Love!
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  • From roro237 on November 13, 2007
    Z you just get better every week! That was pretty intense(mmm) The hole miss understanding of what each other was talking about lol! Then the belly danceing gave me a great visual:) What I liked the best is when Sasuke asked when would be the next time.(yea baby!) Your self proclaim number #1fan is very happy this chapter was hot~~!
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  • From marquesgue1 on November 13, 2007
    Chp. 4...Well - heh I want to reaffirm my existance too!!!

    XD 'Shake that ass' LOL I so was not expecting Naruto's little detour of Sasuke moving his hips like Shakira lool and then I got this image of Sasuke with the bells but not in that way - I don't know if you've watched that anime Enzai? Well it's mostly non con but there's this bit where one of the guys has a ribbon with a bell on it tied to his cock and he's told to fuck a dildo and make it so that his cock bounces so that the bell can ring - well I got and image of Sasuke doing that on Naruto's cock ^_^''' my dirtiness is incurable i think but the SMUT *drool* the way Sasuke didn't even seem to want the stretching even though he hadn't done it before and just pressed himself down on Naruto's cock *dies*

    Next chp is last one huh? Can't wait to see how they treat each other the day after - I'm not particularly worried about Naruto but more Sasuke - you know that stick up his ass likes to cause problems (unless it's Naruto's stick cause that just makes him scream for more heh)but yeah - great!!!

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. don't know if I mentioned but I really like the way you've written Naruto here, is dialogue is one of my favourite aspects of this fic lol just thought i'd let you know - 'i can't wait to own that' = 'where do you want it down at?' *snicker*
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  • From marquesgue1 on November 13, 2007
    God first of all sorry for the lateness!!! But I finally got around to reading chapter 3!!! So this is review for chapter three lol, so yeah wow, opening scene it made my eyes widen when Sasuke actually let his control slip a little and he nudged Naruto’s mouth closer to his erection my eyes went like this >>> O_O and then Naruto thought this ‘The little bastard hadn’t been the innocent victim of a sleep molestation after all.

    The little prick had been actually enjoying it!’ and I just cracked up lol because yeah, Sasuke was actually the one doing the molesting in my opinion XD and then at the end the argument – it seems like its ingrained in Sasuke to keep taking jabs at Naruto and the fact that Naruto snapped back this time pleased me because seriously even I was starting to seriously want to kick the Uchiha’s ass. But then Sasuke’s apology at the end soothed me so yeah! ^_^ Heh loved it so now I’m going to move on onto chapter four *laughs evilly* hehehe

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. good thing about how long it took me to read this is that I get two read two brand new chapters in a row XD

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  • From Dragon7 on November 13, 2007
    I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

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  • From Bluesake on November 13, 2007
    Hot, very hot. Loved the sex scene it was hot : D love naruto's random comment changes. Can't wait for the next chap
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  • From BishounenKrazed on November 13, 2007
    hot. HOT. HOT.

    that's all i can say. ^__^ and i would really LOVE to read about sasuke in bells. that would be like, hot to the nth power.

    and i really like how a seemingly harmless thing like sasuke getting firewood and naruto helping him carry it in came back to bite someone on the ass like that. it was quite clever.

    i'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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  • From kataru on November 13, 2007
    XD as expected from sasUKE,
    initiating ugh their so-called fun...
    riding naruto. *noce-bleed*
    uhuhhuh... sasuke is so sexy with the image.

    *squealing*
    *fainted*
    *more squealing*
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  • From despairs on November 13, 2007
    Ahahahaha! Funny! I found myself laughing when Naruto and Sasuke were talking about different meanings of 'getting wood' and then panting at that smokin hot lemon and then right back to laughing again as Naruto yelled out, "Fuck yes!" and "Shake that ass!" lmao my cats are all staring at me like i've suddenly lost my mind :P And I noticed Sasuke changed his mind about them having a "one time thing" yeah! woot! lol

    As for the length of this story..i'm perfectly satisfied with it. Great ,GREAT job on this one. I Cannot wait to see the ending.
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  • From llyoung on November 13, 2007
    The "wood" conversation at the beginning of the chapter was so funny. Thanks for the udpate.
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  • From llyoung on November 09, 2007
    Still loving your story. Hopefully they will not be rescued too soon.
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  • From MichiTheThird on November 05, 2007
    Damn. I'm sucked into this one too. And I'm insanely afraid of starting The Sound of Dreams at such a late hour...so, I'll stop for now. I hope an update of any kind happens before I eat up The Sound of Dreams (though I'm pretty sure it could happen...so many chapters!)!
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  • From ANON - Lana on November 03, 2007
    ^_^ I love it so far! You found a really great way to work Naruto's whisker scars into the story. Hope you write more soon!
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  • From ANON - lo on November 03, 2007
    Nice job, I like the pace to the story and the story line. This is just good writing.
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