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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From HumanInfiltrator on October 10, 2007
    O, this is going to be fun! I love how Naruto edits his words when he repeats them to Sasuke. Beautiful and extremely funny.
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  • From Picspixie on October 09, 2007
    oh wow , amazing so far, very detailed and great character descriptions, i literally can't wait till you update, please do so soon, really looking forward to seeing how they learn to get along :P
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  • From ANON - DangoLover139 on October 09, 2007
    Yep you must continue this is awesome.
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  • From Dragon7 on October 09, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From llyoung on October 09, 2007
    I love it. Your stories are always so well written and entertaining. Loved the way Naruto would say something and then tell Sasuke he had said something else when Sasuke asked what he had said.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 09, 2007
    I love the double entandre (sp??) anyway. I can't wait for more! Please soon. Sasuke needs to be taken down a peg
    Slave
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  • From despairs on October 09, 2007
    Wow what an amazing first chapter...got me all worked up lol. There were some funny parts too that had me giggling.
    If they are stranded somewhere in a cave, that means no Sakura right? Hell yeah! Love it!
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  • From LadyWolf on October 09, 2007
    Nice start....boy being trapped on a deserted island with those too, OMG!!!
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  • From Kimra on October 09, 2007
    Yay! I be reading and interested. :D
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  • From Ashleechii on October 09, 2007
    OMG!! Poor Naru-chan, always getting hurt :(
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on October 09, 2007
    what a really good story. I love how Naruto mutters to himself and then says something like it when Sasuke asks him what he said.

    Sounds like lots to come in their relationship. LoL. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Avonne on October 09, 2007
    Whoo! That was hilarious, fun, and refreshing, Zrina! It's so good to see you posting another story, although I can assure you that B&B is quite the attention getter! But this is a great little plot line, I just love sexual-tension!bickering between the boys! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D :D


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  • From ANON - Ria on October 09, 2007
    This is great so far! Love it just like I love the rest of your works here.
    Can't wait to read the rest ^_^
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  • From ANON - hina88 on October 09, 2007
    Heh, not surprising I loved it lol, but I loved how Naruto kept mumbling stuff under his breath and then when Sasuke asked he'd just force himself to say something else XD the shoe part I think was my favourite lol 'I lost my shoe' looooool for some reason it just cracked me up. I think if I was stuck with a boss like Sasuke I would've just strangled him, his attitude was definitely not helping the situation but I guess that's just the bastard being a bastard *snicker* gaze seemed to linger too long on Naruto's hair and he seemed to react a bit more than he should to Naruto's hold on him when he almost fell, maybe denial lol.

    “Are you kidding? I’d choke on the fumes from all the hair gel you use,”

    Favourite line I just loved it!!! i was like heh, take that Uchiha!!! XD

    Anyway, liked it and I haven't actually read about this kind of scenario with the two for them which makes it even better!!! Can't wait to see what follows this.

    hina xXxx

    p.s. *snicker* love the title
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  • From ANON - riddle me yellow on October 09, 2007
    YAY! I love planes
    Anyways, lovely first chapter! GAH! I love a pilot Naruto! whee! Please update as soon as you are able. You are so talented! Good description and I love the tension and suspence that you were able to put into words for the crash part of the chapter, well done!

    (Cant wait for the next chapter of b and b by the way)
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