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Reviews for Going Down

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Taryn Winterblade on October 11, 2007
    Long time reader (of all of your fics here), first time reviewer here (gomen, gomen, I suck, I know ;) ). As usual, you've managed to create excellence - as with pretty much everything else you write, it's all... way too damn good. :p

    I've personally always liked the way you portray Naruto - hotheaded, excitable, and good poster child for mild ADHD, but still intelligent enough to get through life. I've had so many people disagree and think that Naruto is completely stupid that it's nice to see him portrayed in a more believable way, especially when the anime (haven't read the manga :( ) fails at this so many times.

    Unfortunately, I suck at actually reviewing things though, so... :D

    -TW
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  • From ANON - animehead on October 11, 2007
    I like!!!! I told you that I love Naruto in this. He makes me laugh. God I'd die. All that rain, dirt, and muck. Ugh. I am so not an outdoors person. I hope I never end up like these two...unless I'm in a plane crash then I hope I survive it. LOL I always love your plots. Weeeeeeeee Something else for me to fangirl over.


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  • From hisoka on October 11, 2007
    YAY FOR GIANT ROCKS!!!CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
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  • From CruelLust on October 10, 2007
    Really cool begingin so far. Having naruto as the piolit is cute, and of course who doesn't like a prick-uke-ass like Sasuke? Hahaa! I can't wait for them ot make 'a move' lol, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - lo on October 10, 2007
    Very, very good. There is already wonderful tension building. Nicely written and fun, great job!
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  • From Adi on October 10, 2007
    WAH!

    I love this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, *has a heart attack all over you*
    ok
    favourite bits, included all the smartass!Naruto comments, they were so damn funny and so cute
    and I loved Sasuke in this!
    hes such an unbelievable ass
    god the way this fic started! with a plane crash! talk about jumping right in!!!
    *loves you to pieces*
    and they way you described them, I could see them in my head, I always love how the Naruto you write appears in my mind, he’s so drool worthy and Sasuke in his business suit thinking about how to fire Naruto GAH!!! I love this!! *smexes you senseless* thank you so much for writing this, I can’t believe you’ve had it for so long

    and I’m so happy you’re writing more *loves loves loves* I think I truly do love it the most when you write humor, because it always has me in hysterics but its sexy at the same time. the intimate hold part? *swoons* you’re all about the fanservice *beams at you*

    Seriously, all the smart ass comments from Naruto just made me laugh so much, I adored this to pieces and its mainly me just fangirling over you :D

    sorry babe, I would write more but I need sleep *just got home* THANK YOU FOR BEING SO AWESOME!

    *kisses*
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  • From MissMayumi on October 10, 2007
    awesome! Continue soon?
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  • From Bluesake on October 10, 2007
    Loved it. xD Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From Allys on October 10, 2007
    LMAO!! Between pathetically, adorable kicked puppies and sputtering old church ladies outside of porn shops, it's getting kinda of hard to breathe through the laughter, *snickers*, 'Please give him a fat head up his ass!' LOL. *Glomps Zrina* pass it on to Adi, this is a fantastic idea XD. You both rock, and I love it already. I think you did the crash, really really well, LOL, although I have no experience to vouch for its authenticity *knocks on wood*. It was pretty excellent and I love how you set up the dynamic already XD. 'Of course Sasuke doesn't harass or harangue his others pilots, Love, he's not interested in any of them' *MUAH, rubs Naruto's back* LOL! Tell the blond beauty not to worry about it. And *snickers* LOL, all I could think of when he was reciting his list of faults was what others things he could do rough XD. *blink blink* 'Who threw my brain in that gutter??' LOL, is it too late to profess my innocence? XD, probably *snickers*. I'm excited about updates!! LOL, but I don't suppose you have a schedule for this one *Hugs u*. Here's to awesome ideas *Kanpai* ♥♥♥
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  • From kataru on October 10, 2007
    Aww.. cuute! XD
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  • From Ordained on October 10, 2007
    Another triumph! xD I loved it, as I love the rest of your stuff, of course.

    Ah, when Sasuke lost his shoe. Hehe. Classic. Keep going. ;D I look forward to the rest.
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  • From blueh on October 10, 2007
    this is so interesting!! i'd love to know what happens next!! *glomps*
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  • From ANON - Clueless on October 10, 2007
    Awesome!! me like sooo erm.....daniel defoeish and sooo hmm... slightly lostish and a whole lot of action i need to read it twice. hit me with more please!! :D
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  • From BishounenKrazed on October 10, 2007
    yay for DFW!!!! i'm in dallas!!! XD

    anyway, this sure is unique and interesting! i can't wait to see where this goes. i think sasuke's got a little crush on naruto, picking on him all the time and whatnot. great job, really!!
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  • From Trollmia on October 10, 2007
    Ohhh, a new story from one of my favourite authors. I like the insult-throwings... *snickers* Just like in the show. I like it alot. Yep, I will keep my eyes open for this one in the future :)
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