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Reviews for Private Dancer

By : katsuyo
  • From NarutoVixin on September 11, 2009
    ok now i really want to read what happens to Naruto lol and how Kiba got the way he is (with the whole belly thing)
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  • From NekoIzumi on July 31, 2008
    Gods! I think I just wet myself at that 'Bug in the Oven' comment! Its just too good! *sits shaking and sniggering causing father dear to silently wonder what the hell his daughter is doing on the net again* I just have to ask... if I can make room for it, would you mind if I used that comment in Nuptials? If you say no, I'll respect it of course.

    On to the real review then.
    Although this whole transa-thing isnt quite my cup of tea, I must say that you made my inner eye see surprisingly clear details in your descriptions of the outfits *one thumb up* not to mention that you mixed in a whole deal of humor, which appeals to me at least *two thumbs up* and then the fact that I virtually dropped my jaw at the whole 'horse cock' thing, thats just the icing on the cake... cock? Well, uhm either way. Two thumbs and two toes up! ;)
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  • From Hedder on October 15, 2007
    *howls with laughter* okay that ending has got to be the best ending ever. Adorable even :3 Great story, absolutely fantastic. There should be a doujinshi of Shika and Neji like that! I liked that there were other couples, you portrayed them well. And a Genma appearance! whoot. ^____^
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  • From inediblefrogs on October 08, 2007
    AFF keeps cutting me off! Short & sweet- I love it.. thank you! and I told you I'd re-read at night!
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  • From KoibitoFemme on October 06, 2007
    I'm not sure if I should be blushing for the dedication or calling the ambulance for blood loss. Very nice I would love to see what became of Naruto and Sasuke. Very nice, very nice indeed. I am so honored that you dedicated something to me. Thank you again! Please when you get the chance write more.
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on October 06, 2007
    This story was soooooooooooo good! Its the best kiba and shika story I have read!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on October 06, 2007
    That was just too damn delicious! Yes delicious. XD After reading that, I'm feeling slightly light headed. I think I'm going to go lay down now. But before I go, know this. You are awesome as is your work, and I hope I get to read more from you in the future. ^^
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  • From ShadowOniShinobi on October 05, 2007
    Haha! Funny, and sexy all at once. I love it. ^^

    Please write more! ^^
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on October 05, 2007
    this was fricken awesome! but this line alone made my night: "Bug in the Oven" lol!!!! i couldn't stop laughing for some reason after reading that. ^__^
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  • From ANON - lo on October 05, 2007
    This was soooooo good. It was Hot! Sexy! and funny. Great work, nicely written. What can I say...This really kicked ass!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 05, 2007
    hot. very nice
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 05, 2007
    ohh, I hasve to admit that was great!!!!
    Slave
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  • From cynaga on October 05, 2007
    Oh, yes~
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