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Reviews for The Definition of 'Mistake'

By : VerapwnsU
  • From Shadowmaiden3 on February 07, 2010
    I love it, the dark cutting themes seem so IC for both of them.

    *stuffs tissue up nose*

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  • From ShadowOniShinobi on October 05, 2007
    That was some very yummy smutty goodness. ^^

    I say there should be more where that came form. hehe
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  • From Misa on October 05, 2007
    I really liked how Naruto is concerned about pleasuring Sasuke and make him realize that even he could feel good. Really fine work, I enjoyed.
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  • From LindyStar on October 05, 2007
    The smut was fantastic, but what I really loved was the story in the beginning. Really nicely done.
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  • From cynaga on October 05, 2007
    “You could never understand the guilt I feel.” Sasuke said, already regretting letting the boy into his apartment.

    “Like the fact that you breathe is a crime. Like your existence is a hindrance even to yourself, that everything would be better if you just stopped. And not just stopping as in stop trying, but really stopping; stop breathing, stop your heart beating, stop your mind thinking. You pray for the sweetness of oblivion, and yet you know there is still something you have to prove, something you have to do. A final selfishness. It’s the only reason we are still alive.” Naruto said quietly.


    You took my breathe away with this passage. How could you know? You had to have been there too.

    After that - the idea of healing Sasuke with love/pleasure; well, an old one and one of the best.

    Thanks so much for this moving and uplifting piece.


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