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Reviews for The Definition of Piety

By : TillThatTime
  • From ANON - Kang on November 11, 2007
    oh, cliffhanger!! ::rolls around on the floor:: please update as soon as you can, I love the fic!
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  • From ANON - lo on November 10, 2007
    Wow! This is getting really good. It just takes your emotions and twists. Nice work.
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  • From gaara89 on November 10, 2007
    Ahh!! It just keeps getting better and better! Please update soon!

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  • From Princessdragonsbane on November 09, 2007
    OMG I think you just broke my heart that was so beautifully painful to witness. I truly felt as though I was watching a moment to privet for my eyes. Well Done. so beautiful. Sasuke's a bastard, and yet I still love and my heart bleeds for the four men in this story. Thank you so much for sharing.
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  • From animelovergirl on November 09, 2007
    Where should I start? Alright, first of all I'm honoured that you like my Shika x Neji fic Fateful Days so much...I know I'm waaaayyy behind with my update...sorry, I'm still continuing it though. So please stay tuned ^^. Now, to your update...hmmm, how shall I put this...hmmm, WAAAAHHHH I cannot find the right words just HOW amazing your story is! And was that an 'almost-kiss' there between Neji and Gaara?...hehehe. And Neji peeking in on Sasuke and afterwards getting all shy...kawaii ^_^ And the bluntness of Gaara *rofl*...brilliant. Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Dreamfool on November 08, 2007
    I like the way this story is written. I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From inediblefrogs on November 04, 2007
    Ahhh... I missed a chapter again, but now I'm caught up. ^___^

    I love the sensual build-up, the teasy hints of voyeurism, the touches of humor, the masculine tenderness... Great chapters.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 03, 2007
    I loved this! You did great! more soon please! I have now idea why it never pops to the top. Mine didn't either for the longest time.
    Slave
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on November 03, 2007
    Very very good. I really like the slow work up to the neji/Gaara relationship, rather than hey we have this in common lets do it. This is very sweet and heart braking. Sasuke's scene was very hot. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - lo on November 03, 2007
    I like what you are doing with this. It is nicely written and realliy just keeps you interested.
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  • From ANON - HumanInfitltrator on November 03, 2007
    That was beautiful, not rushed, not vulgar, actually rather sweet. Thank You.
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  • From despairs on November 03, 2007
    Very good chapter...i think you did everything really, really well. I can see both couples growing closer to each other (wish Sasuke would stop being so frickin stubborn tho) and I like how you're not rushing this but yet it isnt taking forever either...it's a perfect pace. Looking forward to more! :D
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  • From gaara89 on November 03, 2007
    you did a good job! please update soon! i can't wait to see where Neji and Gaara's relationship, or Naruto and Sasuke's relationship for that matter, go from here.
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  • From lexjamandme on November 03, 2007
    Every chapter you write gets more and more brilliant. So much emotion! I could feel Sasuke's frustration, want and fear. (Oh, good job with the tent scene, by the by) I could feel Naruto's sadness. And Neji and Gaara... just amazing. Your writing is amazing. The nighmare scene was so bittersweet. For Sasuke and Naruto because they both want it and yet do nothing and then for Gaara and Neji because they want it and are choosing to walk away. I think I have said this before, but your portrayal of their growing relationship is beautiful. Until the next.
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  • From animelovergirl on November 01, 2007
    Yay, update, update!! *dances around happily* And what a good chapter...I'm still sniggering. The way you discribe Sasuke and Neji and Gaara...hilarious ^_^ And our dear Sasuke...such a naughty boy, playing peeping-tom. Can't wait for more so please go back to your computer and continue. I'll even give you a Naruto-shaped cake *hands TillThatTime the cake* See, there you go. Now please continue ASAP!!!
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