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Reviews for The Definition of Piety

By : TillThatTime
  • From ANON - Amber on December 12, 2007
    Wow. That. Was. HOT! This is an awesome story. Neji and Gaara helping the two of them get together...ah, how selfless.
    Hope to see some Neji/Gaara/Neji smut in the next chapter~
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  • From despairs on December 12, 2007
    Dont be nervous! :D Easy for me to say huh? But really, i think that the lemon was awesome. You made their first time really special. I'm so happy that they are finally together...now if only they stay that way. *crosses fingers* I really hope they do....now for Gaara and Neji woohoo lol.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on December 12, 2007
    man alive! this is one good ass story! i always saw it but never read since i'm not a big neji an gaara couple fan, but i had the day off today so had some time and wooooowww. very excellently written! the second to last chapter literally had my heart in my throat wondering how is was gonna turn out with naruto an sasuke. good god woman. *applauds you* very excited to see how things go with them from here on.

    ps your sasuke solo action... you first??? hard to believe, hard to believe :D
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  • From animelovergirl on December 07, 2007
    Here I was, gone for a few days and then, when I went looking for updates I find not only ONE more chapter but TWO!!! Oh my God, I'm sosososososo happy. These chapters are so beautiful and heartwrenchingly sad. You describe Naruto's pain so well and the way Sasuke is holding himself back from loving him has me ripping my hair out in frustration. And then finally the scene where Neji lost it. *sigh* I love it when he gets all riled up. And that little comforting gesture for Gaara...*another sigh* soooo beautiful. I love it, I love it, I love it!!! More please ^_^ Oh and I updated Fateful Days...(sorry, I don't know how I could let you know any other way, so..yeah)
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  • From squeaker on December 06, 2007
    I love this story.......Poor Neji and Gaara. I am enjoying this one very much.
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  • From gaara89 on December 02, 2007
    Ah!! Oh my god it was so good I had to read it again AND review again!! Please...PLEASE...continue soon! It's getting really good, and yes you are keeping them in character quite well! :)
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  • From ANON - lo on December 02, 2007
    That was a very intense chapter! Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 02, 2007
    OMFG YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE THIS!!!! Please Im begging you to please update and keep up the good work, I am sooooo loving this right now
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  • From ANON - HumanInfitltrator on December 02, 2007
    Aaaaah. And now?

    I've always been partial to Gaara/Neji.

    Thank you!
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  • From on December 02, 2007
    I haven't told you yet but I love this story; absolutely completely and totaly love it. I'm glad Sasuke has finally dislodged his head from his ass and is finally going to let Naruto love him :-)
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  • From gaara89 on December 02, 2007
    OMG! You updated!! and what a great chapter it was!! please! update soon!!! please i'm begging you!!
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  • From ANON - LadyApollonia on November 14, 2007
    What!!! What is the brilliant idea?!?!? I must know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE update extremely soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - tofupimp on November 12, 2007
    I could squeal and exclaim over this fanfiction for the rest of eternity...I can't believe you left us hanging so! EVIL!!
    I love the emotions that you explore--the setup between the four characters are ingenious; Naruto and Sasuke seem so in character to me that I can see them in my head acting out what you've written! This is probably my favorite NaruxSasu ficlet yet, which is something considering I've been following the fandom since 6 years ago!
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  • From inumoon3 on November 11, 2007
    OH MY POOR NARU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Neji's plan works and Sasuke needs to be slapped and forced to realize how much he loves Naruto!!!!!
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  • From despairs on November 11, 2007
    This story just keeps getting better and better each time i read it. Chapter 7 had me in tears at the end....which is a compliment to you, it means you have written it well (as usual) I don't know why Sasuke has to hurt Naruto so much and so bad but i hope he makes up for it in the long run. *hugs poor Naruto* Hang in there kiddo.

    Also i noticed Neji and Gaara are feeling more comfortable holding hands :D I think thats awesome. They are so cute together.
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