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Reviews for The Definition of Piety

By : TillThatTime
  • From on January 11, 2008
    Yay another chapter. Sorry I didn't realise when I left my last review that you had updated this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter and the impending smut that could possibly follow ^_^ On a side note I've always found the Neji and Gaara thing rather interesting; don't get me wrong I do enjoy reading the smut between them it's just that they have never had much interaction in the Manga but I really like how you have brought them together with getting to know one another. It fits well.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on January 11, 2008
    though i'm just here for the sasunaru i have to say that gaara/neji was heartbreakingly sweet. sasunaru got the first 10 chapter and they were an awesome ten so i'm willing to sit back an let the gaara/neji/gaara fans have their moment :D
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  • From on January 11, 2008
    Oh there is no need to be sorry I completely understand; I have been MIA as well due to a death in my husbands family. No worries the pic is still for you but I probably won't finish for a few more weeks because I have some serious catching up to do on my artwork. I am scheduled to go to a convention in two weeks to sell some art and needless to say I'm a little behind (long story I won't torment you with). I really don't want to rush the pic because I want it to look somewhat respectable. I'll let you know when it is finished though.
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  • From angelsdelight on December 27, 2007
    Stop Playing with my emotions like Sasuke and get to pushing Gaara and Neji together. I need the lemony goodness

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  • From gaara89 on December 26, 2007
    Are you ever going to update?
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  • From on December 23, 2007
    Hey, I am currently drawing a pic of Naruto and well the picture has developed from my original intention. Anyway due to the direction it's going I'm going to deticate to this fic because when I looked at it this story was the first to come to mind. I hope that it turns out well and I'm not sure when exactly it will be finished. If you don't have a yaoi gallery account email mail me so I can send it to you when I'm done XD.
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  • From animelovergirl on December 16, 2007
    That has to be one of the most well written lemon's I have ever read. I honestly hope that when my time comes to write one I'll do just as good of a job as you did. It was hot, sweet, sexy and beautiful and I can't wait for the Gaara x Neji lemon ^_^
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  • From ANON - lo on December 13, 2007
    That was, as a whole a sweet chapter. The sex scene was a little long but nicely done.
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  • From inumoon3 on December 12, 2007
    THE LEMON WAS FREAKING AWESOME!!! I'm so happy Sasu and Naru-chan got their time together! I wonder what Neji and Gaara were doing...hehe...
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 12, 2007
    This was really good but...well...Ive actually found myself more interested in Gaara and Neiji than I have in the main characters. Lol, what can I say, your good at what you do. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on December 12, 2007
    whoooo, early christmas present for meee!!! this must have been posted mere hours after i reviewed :D :D yaayy no long waiting for me!

    Have to say, naruto is one badass uke! i adore demanding uke!naruto. i really thought he was gonna seme out there for a moment lol, but regardless he was still seriously calling the shots on this one. My Gosh! face push inna dirt an all, you go boys! hot hot hott!!

    And of course i HAVE to comment on naruto laughing at sasuke's 'sissy' comment at the start. i was rolling! LMAO sasuke did sup to feel like a real suck out bag juice
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  • From on December 12, 2007
    Hi this is shai's inner bastard; shai is currently passed out on the floor due to massive blood loss and all ceasing of brain function. *crawls back up to computer chair*. Damn I think I just got hit by a drive by lemon ;-) Your first one eh...hmmm are you sure about that because it was incredible. So I wonder were the boys sitting in the bushes watching this display of animalistic sex??? I can't wait for the next chapter to find out. Oh and thanks for the massive nose bleed.
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  • From gaara89 on December 12, 2007
    Don't be nervous, that was well done. I can't wait to see what Gaara and Neji have to say about it, and perhaps some comforting of each other as well. Good job, I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on December 12, 2007
    You did a great job at popping both yours and their cherries!!! It was excellent. One thing though, you have develope instead of envelope as Sasuke enters Naruto. Which if you think about it, is pretty funny. This is great, when do we get to see Neji and Gaara jump each other... I can wait, I just don't want to.
    Slave
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  • From railynn2001 on December 12, 2007
    Wow...just wow, that was some fucking amazing sex. Damn
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