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Reviews for The Definition of Piety

By : TillThatTime
  • From ANON - Anon on January 30, 2008
    I just read the whole thing and the story has been really beautiful and IC the whole time. I love the plot. I can't wait for another chapter ^^
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  • From biiisti on January 26, 2008
    I absolutely loved the last chapter! I've never been huge fan of GaaNeji but i'm certainly one right now!

    By the way, you'r writing is good and there isn't spelling/grammar mistakes and the plot is also good ^^

    I hope u update soon (:
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  • From ANON - Tofu-pimp on January 26, 2008
    Oh whoa..I'm so glad that you liked the fanart! :'D It makes me soo happy inside to know! *cheers*
    I really enjoyed the softness of this chapter--it was beautiful seeing how tentative they were together. I can't wait for the next chappie! ;0; I swear, more fanart is due for your hard work.
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  • From ANON - lo on January 25, 2008
    Nicely done. That was both sweet and sad. I can't wait to see more!
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  • From gaara89 on January 25, 2008
    Please tell me you're going to update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2008
    Dammit why do you make me like SasuNaru?

    Btw, your lemon cherry was popped but good *fans self*
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  • From gaara89 on January 14, 2008
    Oh my god!!! You absolutely have to update soon!! Please i'm begging!!!
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  • From despairs on January 13, 2008
    Oh!! I love this new chapter...yay for Sasuke and Naruto. And I love the new Fanart! It's wonderful!
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  • From PieldeLava on January 13, 2008
    Great story. I can't believe I haven't read it sooner. I like the slow but sure built up of Neji and Gaara realtionship. Look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From on January 13, 2008
    Oh babe I can only hope that it looks good; I think you'll like it though.
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on January 12, 2008
    i love story, and i hope u have one more chapter in you!
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  • From ANON - Tofupimp on January 12, 2008
    Ah, I don't know if they allow linking..but in the case that they do,
    http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h146/tofu-pimp/sasunarufic.jpg
    A quickie to encourage you to keep going! :D I hope that you like it!
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  • From ANON - lo on January 12, 2008
    That was a good chapter. I really like what you are doing with this story. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - Tofupimp on January 12, 2008
    Haha--I waited months for a continuation, and I'm glad I did!
    I could write a long-ass review naming the brilliant lines you put here and there; and the great moves within the character interactions, but instead, I'll just settle on congratulating you for putting together a nicely written fic, which is rare for me to find these days. The sex scene was very good; I'm rather sensitive to romantic scenes, and I felt that some parts might have been a little over the top, but overall, it was very delicate and beautiful. I especially love the gentle touches you put between neji and gaara; I couldn't think of a lovlier way to weave in that pairing without making it seem OOC. Fantastic work! I'm looking forward to the NXG!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 11, 2008
    aaaarrrrrggggghhhh, you finally update and its a fricken teaser. Oh the inhumanity of it all. Well anyhoo, loving this as usual. Could you make the next chapter a little longer or perhaps post more than one at a time. IM BEGGING FOR GOOD FICTION HERE, I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! Oh...and um...keep up the good work.
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