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Reviews for The Definition of Piety

By : TillThatTime
  • From Starryeyedstar on March 03, 2008
    LMAO

    First Neji and Gaara work together to get Sasuke and Naruto to confess, now it's Naruto and Sasuke tag teaming them. Lovely bit of poetic justice if I do say so myself!
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  • From on March 03, 2008
    What!!! No, no urinating on me please...but you are allowed to hump the hell out of me. I loved getting humped and humping others *starts to frantically hump computer* can you feel the love?? Oh and loved the posessivness..."MINE" Yeah that's right.

    Oh but babe I have to warn you I would make a horrible uke..I way to dominate and independant *still madly humping computer* but I am taking applications for an opening uke position for myself XD

    Ok so what were you smoking when you wrote this chapter because it was freaking hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing..oh my Sasuke bastard was great with his bastardly comments towards Neji and Gaara.

    I'm so damn happy that he's going to agree to uke for Naruto *starts humping couch*

    Come on you little emo bastard you know you want Naruto to show you all about his stanima. I can't wait for the next chapter and to read how Naruto's plan works out.


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  • From ANON - cinnamon_star on March 03, 2008
    *squeals* Thank you so much! Finally the next chapter!!! I just loved it. So many sentences made me laugh out loud like "So, Uchiha, how did the fucking go last night?" or "...and he made a mental note in his sleep-hazed mind to smirk in triumph later because, damn, he was good.". It's funny how the story changed. At first Naruto and Sasuke had problems to admit their feelings for eachother and Neji & Gaara tried to bring them together and now it's the other way round. Very, very nice story so far. Keep up the good work. Ciu...
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  • From gaara89 on March 03, 2008
    OMG!! I almost didn't believe it when I saw it!! Great chapter! Please!!! PLEASE don't make me wait so long again!! Oh and CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! Thanks for the shout out! I'll always be a loyal reviewer, even if you don't update often. I'll just review until you do! Yay!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 03, 2008
    hahahahaha etc etc soooo freaking hilarious. the entire chapter was awesome! full of win. sasuke and naruto's interaction was wonderful as usual, all the teasing and how our little seme said he was more than willing to bottom for naruto aawwww lol i love them! And of course the nejigaara team vs sasuke MWHAHAHAHAHA leading to utter insanity like neji pulling gaara where?! LMAO far far FAAR too entertaining :)
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  • From ANON - Azumi-chan on February 22, 2008
    Wonderful, I do hope that Neji can get over that, he should be with Gaara, they are really meant for each other. Well written and very much in character all the way around. I simply adore your devotion to keep everyone in character and your hard work to creat orginal stories. I love it when I come across real stories like this one with real writers writing the stories. You truly have a natural ability to write, keep it up and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From animelovergirl on February 19, 2008
    Waaaahhhaaaa, I'm BAD! Bad, bad yaoilovergirl...here you go and read my story, leaving me such an amazing review and what do I do? Nothing... I'm so, so, so sorry....your fic is amazing, your writing style is amazing...YOU are amazing... Thank you for the new chapter and please continue ASAP. I swear, I'll never ever leave you again!! Especially now that Gaara and Neji are finally getting closer. I soooo can't wait for more shy Gaara and guilty Neji!
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  • From ANON - Chrysler on February 17, 2008
    Um....please tell me that's not the ending....cause if it is, I'm going to have to kiiiiill you....no really.....that's cruel! I was looking forward to that couple more than Sas/Naru but I'll admit, I like how slow you're taking this. Its cute
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  • From ANON - caidanu on February 11, 2008
    Oh I almost forgot, make sure that you've activated your account before trying anything on the y!. Not sure if that helps or not but I had forgotten to activate mine when I first made an account and drove myself insane for about an hour trying to figure out what the hell I was doing wrong. It's the little that will most likely one day kill us or cause us to go biserk and take out half the town ^_^
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  • From ANON - caidanu on February 11, 2008
    Ok so here is the link to my page, it will take you to my submissions. http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/caidanu/ I don't know what it is about the y! but I still have a hard time navigating it sometimes and I have no clue how to search for other poeple on there. Good luck and if that still doesn't work e-mail me shai69_420@yahoo.com. I'll ttyl babe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2008
    thanks
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  • From ANON - caidanu on February 10, 2008
    Ok babe I'm done with your fan art and I hope you like it. Sorry that it has taken so long but I ran into some trouble with the coloring process. Anyway I may redo it for you when I get a drawing pad for my computer so please forgive the mistakes. I've posted on y! gallery here is the link. http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/385256/ You may need a y! account to view this but I doubt it since it doesn't have adult content. If you have any problems viewing the pic email me and I'll send it to you but hey you should get a y! if you don't have one because it's so much fun.
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  • From gaara89 on February 05, 2008
    I hope you are updating soon! I love this story so much! Please!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 05, 2008
    Continue!!! Gaara and Neji are so perfect for each other, I love they way they interact... they bring out precious things in each other.
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  • From ANON - caidanu on January 30, 2008
    Oh good chapter ^_^ poor Neji having those damn moral dilemmas. Gaara may have to just corner him and make him realize that he's a big boy and can handle himself. Oh and I'm almost finish drawing then it will be off to coloring in th pic for you.
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