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By : aiesha
  • From on October 08, 2007
    There's nothing wrong with your story, I myself find it quite enjoyable. Just ignore the flames and keep writing it however you want.
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  • From nekoleopard on October 08, 2007
    well i don't care what those other people think i love this story its so great i just love naruto as seme eeeeee *squeals like a fangirl* i love you don't stop writing.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 08, 2007
    Okay, whoever felt the need to point that out to you was an idiot! It's your damn story and I like it. If you take too much time on the descriptions it will just bog down. So whoever that was SHUT UP! I think the characters are fine. After all, it isn't like this is fanfic.... oh yeah, it is! Actually, I hadn't read this story before but I'm definitely enjoying it. Please continue and ignore the flamers, actually, just roast a marshmallow. Nothing rips me more than flamers, some of whom couldn't write a story well enough to find their own ass!

    Um, okay, I guess I got my point across.
    So then, just keep going. I love this one!
    Slave
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  • From ringpop on October 08, 2007
    Hahahah this fic is the best!!!.....although i'm a little confused.....how'd they jump from strangers @ an art show.....to boyfriends in Pittsburg, fucking in a hotel???......don't you think they're moving a bit fast???.....hmmm not that i mind......i don't mind at all....trust. Hehe well not scrutinizing or anything...i love this fic....you'll have a shit-load of hits if you keep it up!!! I'LL BE WATCHING FOR IT!!!
    Zee_Kay
    ♥
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  • From Allys on October 08, 2007
    LMAO!! The little dialogue at the end of the chapter was hilarious!! XD. I almost died when Sasuke struck a pose *snickers*. This was great fun, a little eye popping, LOL, but great fun. Hehehe the whole time Naruto was lecturing Orochimaru all I heard in my head was Blah. Blah blah. Blah blah blah blah. Yeah I didn't understand any of that, LOL, XD, even so it was still great fun. I enjoyed it immensely. But you really shouldn't take people on that much. You should take everything with a pinch of salt, if they don't like it they don't have to read it *Hugs u* Sorry I took so long to get to this, sometimes I just have way too much stuff to do. Ja, see you next chapter.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on October 08, 2007
    In response for that flame geez! I must not have been paying attention I was under the impression that anything that was described about Naruto's possessions was to show that he had things rather than being poor and have not like most stories describe him as. Not to forget most stories show Sasuke as a rich brat who has to be broken down to actually see others. I like this story so far and I have envisioned Naruto to be a bohemian renaissance. Never considered him to be dirty either. If anything I had expected Sasuke to be a little more stubborn and assholish I find the story to be truly refreshing and intellectual you did you homework and its impressive. Although you are writing for your audiences pleasure work can not be truly appreciated unless the writer is happy with their work. So if you aren't really having fun then no one will. Thank you for the story.
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  • From ringpop on October 07, 2007
    Hahahaha this is way cute!!! I can't wait til later chapters, this seems like it's going to be very interesting : ]
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  • From darktoy on October 06, 2007
    Well, Minato proved to be somewhat of an jackass, but I still love him. (It's hard to hate the Yondaime, XD)

    I loved tha chapter, and the way the relationship is developing is quite amusing. I'll be waiting for more! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From fangirlqueen on October 06, 2007
    this story is awsome i cant wait for the lemons!
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  • From lexjamandme on October 06, 2007
    I love Naruto's sneaky note giving. Cracks me up. It's interesting meeting a portrayal of Naruto's dad that isn't the perfect father. I like it. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From Allys on October 06, 2007
    LMAO!! So much for you can't write long chapters XD *Glomps u* You're really sucking me into this XD. I don't mind your Minato at all, he doesn't seem like that bad a guy, but LOL, I kept expecting him to look at Naruto, screw up his face, and ask "What is that god awful thing on your head?" *snickers* hehehehe XD. I mean how many parents approve of dreadlocks XD, hehe, but then again he seems like a supremely informed fellow, he probably knows they're just extensions. Whoo hooo!! LOL, I'm all with Sasuke *does the lemon dance* LOL, it's like a modified version of a rain dance XD, it's mean to bring the lemons XD. I adored the napkin invite, especially the fact that it had a detailed pic of Sasuke on the back, makes you wonder exactly how surprised Naruto really was if he had time to flip over the napkin XD. That kid really is an enigma and I love how he enjoys teasing and tormenting Sasuke. You tickle my brain missy, especially the Bertrand Russell bit. I had a teacher in high school who thought he was the shit. LOL, at that point I was leaning to being a Hobbsian *snickers* I was going through my angry teenager people suck phase XD. God natsukashi ne?? I also love that Sasuke being so understanding XD, I had a little vision of him referring to their respective dad's "You don't ask about mine and I won't ask about yours" *smirks* This is progressing quite nicely ;), did you mean plot bunnies for this story or for other stories?? LOL, sorry I babble when I'm excited. Have a wonderful day/weekend love, Ja.
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  • From gaara89 on October 06, 2007
    Very cute. I like this alot and i'll be looking out for the update!
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  • From nekoleopard on October 06, 2007
    aw man i love this story i myself am mayjoring in biology/genetics but i still love this story i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From SasUke28 on October 05, 2007
    Oh wow it wasn't hard to figure out sasuke is an idiot*snicker*hehe loved the second chapter and I LOVE YOU TOO UR WELCOME CUZ I LOVE UR STORY!
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  • From Allys on October 05, 2007
    Strange and still interesting. I can't decide if Sasuke is in denial or if he's all rearing to go, although I'm leaning to the second option. I like that Naruto does oils, but you said he also does watercolour? Still interesting, usually the two don't mix well XD, not the whole oil and water thing but rather the planning (or in the case of oils, lack of planning) processes. LOL, but then he could be a conceptual artist and just use whatever methods fit his particular concept at the time. me personally I'm more into the romantic aspect of the thing which has nothing at all to do with romance, very little to do with concept and everything to do with process. So I stick to oils mainly, because it's the actual act of painting that I enjoy. Wow, that was completely left of what I should have been doing which is reviewing, but LOL, bear with me. I really enjoy the fact that Naruto used to be a philosophy student, so he can definitely hold his own against Sasuke. LOL, my biggest problem as an artist with philosophy majors is that in all the study of life and the watching, a lot of the time they forget to live it. But Naruto can hopefully get him out of his head and into the moment more often. LOL, invade his head with prefabricated notions of love and lust as well as some hopefully not so fabricated ones. I'm still enjoying this immensely although I had thought Minato would pop his head in, but *sighs* alas, he didn't. LOL, I love him by the way, so you can just ignore me. An author once said that 'Kami had graciously taken Naruto and super-sized him' XD, and I've just been hooked ever since (don't remember who it was, if you do can you tell me). Sending you massive amounts of love and encouragement! Keep up the good work! Ja.
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