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By : personart
  • From ANON - Daga on November 04, 2013
    I almost feel bad about my self because I love this pairing so much (Naruto's fourteen :O ) But I comfort myself that's entirely your fault cause you've made it so damn HOT. Jiraya was my favorite character from manga but I would never think of him an Naruto.... at least until now ;) Thanks... or not :P
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  • From ANON - Legato on October 17, 2009
    This is my absolute favourite Naruto pairing, too!! I loved the way you write and how you kept them in character. There should be more people writing about JirayaxNaruto, I think they're so perfect together! Thanks so much for sharing this!
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  • From ANON - 8oo on October 01, 2008
    I really don't understand why JiraNaru ISN'T popular. D:
    I mean... He's sex on feet god dammit!!
    And Naruto is adorable! Sexy plus adorable equals best pairing ever.
    I bought a poster with Jiraiya and Naruto smiling and being all gay together.
    Special. I love how you write. IT was sweet, hot, sexy, graphic, lol, and cute.
    You should write moooore!
    We need moooore JiraNaru!!
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  • From ANON - Ellenlome on January 20, 2008
    O_O Whoa. *blinks and grins* HOTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *starts fangirling*

    Great story! I give it three thumbs up and a 11/10! I love JiraNaru! :D *drools* XD
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  • From DetoxAngel on October 05, 2007
    Yeah, call me crazy but I think Pervy Sage is hot too. I don't know why but he is. To say he's the hottest, I wouldn't go that far. Kakashi is THE fucking HOTTEST thing to ever grace Naruto. But I digress, this was a gorgeous story, I sure hope you have more. In fact, I'm going to go check it out.
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  • From Rosebud on October 04, 2007
    Wow... So I don't usually read this pairing. (I think I read a one-shot a long time ago, but other then that...nope.) I can't say that its because I don't like them together either -- for the most part this pairing appeals to me in a positive way -- it's just that a lot of summaries don't intrigue me enough to click on the button and read the story. However...Your story did intrigue me and I obviously clicked on it, and... well, Damn, it was really hot! ^^ And when I got to the end, I wanted to read more!

    I also love your style too; its very erotic. And I could definitely picture each scene and I knew exactly what you were talking about in regards to Naruto opening his mouth... And PWP, Haha, that's what I'm talking about babe! XD

    Seriously though, I adore shota and these two are really Hot together. It was just recently that I was flipping through a Doujinshi, and I seen a Jiraya/Fourth pairing and so I'm loving that pairing too! Hehe! XD And your right, it is sad how certain shipping's don't get the love that they deserve! I am currently trying to "spread the love" with Suigetsu/Naruto, so I wish you MUCH luck with Jiraya/Naruto and if I ever find inspiration to write this pairing I will dedicate it to you!

    Great story and I hope to read more soon! XD

    (Sorry for ranting...)
    ~Crimson2006 ^^
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  • From ANON - sexybishlover on October 03, 2007
    I'M UNDERAGED!!!!!WHOA!!!FOURTEEN RULZ!!!YEAH!!!
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  • From ANON - sexybishlover on October 03, 2007
    Yummy. That was hawt I liked jiraya ERO-SENNIN!.
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  • From ANON - sexybishlover on October 03, 2007
    Yummy. That was hawt I liked jiraya ERO-SENNIN!.
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  • From Cepheus on October 03, 2007
    *fans self*

    this was pure hottness on your part, i can't even start on that. *breathes* wow. o.o this was the best smut i've read in a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong while. gods. it was awesome *goes take a cold cold shower*

    anyway. apart the hottness of the lemon, which was just great, PWP rules... :D but jiranaru is one of my lovely sins as pairings (my fav is itanaru though). it's hot, and it adds that jira has EXPERIENCE BABY even though he only gets pervy with it.

    can't believe he's going to die in the manga, but i'll ignore it. :D

    jiranaru needs love. love. love i say!

    and i love you for writing this. i want more. o.o so much more. and sorry for the rambling but i am still dizzy for the lemon... *dies*

    if i get how to add this fic in my rec list on AFF profile, i will. i have to. it's too good.

    kudos and love :D

    SOY/MF/Ceph
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  • From ANON - minjin on October 03, 2007
    Me liked thissssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so fucking hot!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah more more more!!!You writing is absolutely gorgeous!!!!!!! My face got red and now i feel horny muahahahahahahahaha
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  • From cynaga on October 03, 2007
    TOO HOT~! whew... I love, love, love Jiraiya too.
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  • From tenshiofdoom on October 03, 2007
    Me again!! I just went to your profile, you said you weren't fluent in English? If you would like a beta, then I would love to volunteer *coughBEGcough*
    Anyway, if you would like that, my email is tenshiofdoom@gmail.com
    Okay I'm going :D keep writing!
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  • From tenshiofdoom on October 03, 2007
    OMFG *dies from bloodloss* That was so HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ahem, please note my excitement :P
    Day-am wow, that was amazing and I LOVED it!! Please write more like this, cause the world needs more of this pairing!!!!!!!!!!!
    Wow, *fans herself* ahem, excuse me, I think I might go read that again.... *goes and gets a tissue box first* stupid blood nose....
    P.S. I LOVE YOU!!!!! Thank you for writing this *glomp*
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on October 03, 2007
    I love this pairing! This story was HOT!!! Nice writing style....WRITE MORE! lol
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