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Reviews for You Cannot See Love

By : omgitsgwen
  • From Rosebud on October 08, 2007
    This is a really cute fic. I love it. XD
    I hope you get the rest of the chapter up soon, cause I want to read more! ^^
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  • From Catsura on October 02, 2007
    Good, I love it, no offence and I probably have no room to talk but possibly longer chapters?
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 02, 2007
    I think this is great! I'll beta for you if you want.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2007
    hmm............ i like it :)
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  • From BlackSandGara on October 02, 2007
    Hey,
    10-02-07

    If you are still in the need of a Beta I would love to be one for you; but the down side is that I do have work and school so I can not promise to get it to you the same day you send it. I'll try thou to get it back to you as soon as I can.

    ~The Black Sand of Gara

    P.S. My e-mail is Black DragonRose5@aol.com
    P.P.S. Don't you have to be at least over 18 to work in a tatoo parlor, so are they in high school or college? And doesn't Naruto need parent consent to get his lip piercing if he is under 18?
    P.P.P.S. I love the ground plot of this story so far, Naruto with a lip ring. I can't wait to see what Sasuke has. ^vv^
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  • From Dragon7 on October 02, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From dragonite2388 on October 02, 2007
    oh goodie! another good story.. [^_^]
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  • From leanne on October 02, 2007
    I am curious to read onward becuase the setting is different and it would be rather amusing to see what will happen when Naruto suddenly has to deal with a transfer studen, Sasuke. I think you are doing fine as for a beta, I think you will find one on this site where it says beta.
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  • From hisoka on October 02, 2007
    IS THAT REALLY HOW THEY PERCE YOUR LIP?I HATE NEEDLES TOO, WHEN EVER I GO TO THE DOCTOR MY BROTHER MAKES IT WORSE FOR ME BY SCREAMING WHEN HE GETS SHOTS SO I FREAK OUT THE DOCTORS USUALLY HALF TO HOLD ME DOWN SO I CAN GET MY SHOTS*SIGH*IM PATHETIC SOMETIMES.HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON THIS IS COOL AND WELL WRITEN
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  • From Picspixie on October 02, 2007
    hehe how cute, was waiting for sasuke to stab him in the face or something when naruto touched his knee :P, hope you continue soon, i really want to see how they interact when they meet again
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  • From LadyRonin on October 01, 2007
    i like what i have seen so far. with the way you started your story off it has a lot of potential for anything to happen. when sasuke joins naruto's school will he be having any rivals for naruto. is sakura, hinata, and ino going to be a help or a hindrance. i hope you continue with this story and can't wait til the next update.
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  • From MoveThemHands on October 01, 2007
    Awww I love it!

    So cute how Sasuke wasn't all "Little baby D
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  • From narutovixen383 on October 01, 2007
    Oh Naruto with a lip ring! Very very smexy! I like this story so far! Keep them coming!!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 01, 2007
    I think this will be great! Keep on.
    Slave
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  • From Picspixie on October 01, 2007
    k k i'll give feedback :P, i luv the idea, sounds like it has alot of potential, and i really want to see what happens with it :P please continue soon
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