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Reviews for Slave for a weekend

By : kinai26
  • From Dragon7 on May 14, 2008
    Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

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  • From bloodyqueen on February 04, 2008
    Sasuke and Naruto sure have a way of acting so damn bad.

    But, I do feel sad for Sakura but she should understand that love is something that anyone can find even her.

    Update, Update, Update.

    Thanks
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2007
    Chapter One--Jeez, some people really want him, huh.

    Chapter Two--The cliffhanger line was interesting.

    Chapter Three--Heheheh, I liked the bit about Sasuke thinking about what he’ll make Naruto do. . . . TO SASUKE: “Sign of weakness” my foot--it’s called “politeness,” you jerk! TO AUTHOR: I like the play-the-dumb-blonde idea. Oooh, great line to end the chapter with.

    Chapter Four--TO NARUTO: Oh, he might. He just might. . . . Very perceptive. TO AUTHOR: I like Naruto’s slow train of thought for when he thinks about Sasuke’s intentions.
    THANK YOU for choosing “Sasuke-sama.” It’s much more sexier than the other titles, in my opinion. ^_^ (!!)ALERT!(!!) Check the last paragraph of this scene . . . Did you mean “cook” dinner?? Cuz if you did, you may want to take a close look at the word “cook.” ^_~
    Mmm, nice shower scene.

    Chapter Five--TO NARUTO: Oooh, that’s a wicked idea, heheheh. But I wonder if you’ll get away with it. . . . HAH! Good one! “What else do you require from me tonight?” That was great. XD
    TO AUTHOR: These cliffhangers are awesome!! They’re so erratic and at odd moments--they’re great!

    Chapter Six--Whoaaaa, nice move: They’re both determined to get the other on their knees. Now I wonder who’s going to succeed. TO NARUTO: XD Where do you come up with these lines. Great afterthought about not having any clothes. XD TO SASUKE: Who’s the clueless one???

    Chapter Seven--Fifth time, hee hee. XD . . . Uh-oh. TO SASUKE: Give it up, kid, you ain’t gonna win. TO AUTHOR: I like the bit about Sasuke fondling the boxers--very sensual. TO SASUKE: I’m with you--I didn’t need to hear it either. XP

    Chapter Eight--Strange noises . . . we all know what that means. ^_^
    Nice lawnmowing scene, by the way. That’d be pretty good to draw.
    TO SASUKE: Good excuse, Sasuke, I’d buy it. TO AUTHOR: Must you give him so many at once? The poor boy’ll go numb. . . .

    Chapter Nine--Verrrry good, but stop censoring it!!
    Wha--Awww man! You really had me there, and it turns out to be a dream?? Arrgh.

    Chapter Ten--Hee hee, pinch, pinch. ^_^
    Oh my, he begs. . . . I liked that part.
    Waaah, I don’t like censoring!
    Very sexy. It seems a little original too.

    Chapter Eleven--“Hot piece of hotness” . . . That says it all. ^_^ (Actually, I think there is such a word.) Very hot and cute (kinda OOC, though, but I don’t mind that much).

    Chapter Twelve--“More of a rice person” . . . I liked that line. I wonder why same-sex marriages aren’t tolerated in Konoha . . . ? Guess it makes for nice plot. Um, I think the old guy at the ramen place is named Teuchi or something like that; the shop is called “Ichiraku” though.
    I love the “Code Talk” between the two at the ramen stand. Hee hee, Teuchi’s so clueless. ^^ You misspelled “Shikamaru” by the way. XD
    Uh-oh, I hope they don’t get busted or hurt. I hope their friends will be okay with it.

    Chapter Thirteen--Hee hee, Shikamaru doesn’t care. ^ ^ Good, Kiba’s cool.
    I guess that law makes sense, though it seems kinda farfetched.
    EWWW, I didn’t need that mental image. XP . . . ACK!!! Gai and Ibiki?!? :ded:
    Hmm, would Jiraiya help? Let’s hope he’s not homophobic.
    O_O I luuuuuv Sasuke’s move on Naruto. XD Oh yes, thank you, THANK YOU for the SasuNaru! ^_^ I’M WITH YOU, INNER SAKURA!! XD
    Um, “dai jobu?” ? What’s that mean??
    Okay, now that was totally sad, what Sakura thought in her dream of being all alone from then on. PLEASE let her be okay later. T_T

    Chapter Fourteen--Mmm, I think Kiba should’ve told her that she’s not unlovable first before he said anything else to her question.
    I thought the Kyuubi being anti-war was a little weird, since he attacked the village in the past and all. But I guess maybe it could’ve been out of grief and rage for his offspring; maybe some Konoha ninja killed it.
    Hee hee, Sasuke was being totally honest with Tsunade. XDDDDDDD

    Oh boy, I can’t wait for the party! ^_^

    OVERALL: Needs some proofreading. Nice cliffhangers, though. DROP THE CENSORING!!

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  • From MoveThemHands on December 08, 2007
    LOVE this story!!

    I look forward to the next update whenever that may be :D
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  • From Dragon7 on December 06, 2007
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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  • From Dragon7 on November 18, 2007
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From cynaga on November 18, 2007
    Hurray for a terrific story! More, more...
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  • From MikoKriszty on November 18, 2007
    Please update - I love it that you change the role of the uke and the seme! Even if only for a dream... It should happen in reality *pervy grin*

    When you update, could you leave me a mail? muveszno@citromail.hu

    thx! Also, if you feel like having a beta-reader, you can contact me ^.^ (your writing is good, much better than many I have read, but there are still some misspellings, and he never calls Tsunade Baa-sama, that would be respectful somewhat, only baa-chan :D)
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  • From LadyWolf on October 11, 2007
    Sweet chapter!!! can't wait till the next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 11, 2007
    Hey! I think this is a great story. thanks
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2007
    aaaaaaw, this story was/is so cute! Hope you will keep on writing it for some other chapters, because I totally loved it!

    read ya soon,

    hak.
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  • From LadyWolf on October 01, 2007
    Hey!!! I'm sorry for not reviewing after every chapter, but I get into the story so much I review at the end ;o) I wonder what's up next for the two? I can't wait to read more!
    Oh yea,,,I didn't think that was a dream! That was sweet the way you put that in there!!!!

    want to read more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on October 01, 2007
    I always enjoy a good fic where Naruto is being his sexy naughty self instead of a complete moron(which can be fun too). Good fic very enjoyable.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on October 01, 2007
    ohhh, this sounds like fun!
    Slave
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