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Reviews for Naruto the Battousai

By : kerrde06
  • From TheDon1023 on November 16, 2007
    i thought this was gonna be the end of the wave arc, and naruto is fuckin up a lot lately, seriously, hes been playing with his enemies allowing time for them to escape and revealing vital information without making sure there were no easedroppers. i mean isnt this the kinda shit you would do regularly when fighting a war like he did? it should of been to the point that putting up some sort of sound barrier would be come instinct and especially when he is fighting people he would know better than to not take a fight seriously, fuckin stupid is what Naruto has been lately. i really hope he gets his shit together though for real.

    -The Don
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on November 15, 2007
    Wow that was alot to take in... Kurenai is quite stunned and she is going to think about everything now. But what is going to happen to Sakura since she heard about his kekkai genkai.. Does he knowa jutsu to make people forget stuff or is he going to threaten her to keep quiet about everything... Why not have Tsunami be more than a one nighter like a cocubine or something....
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  • From iwillnotdie on November 02, 2007
    Hey, I just wanted to review telling you how much I'm enjoying this fic. Keep it up with the long chapters and the pairings are well thought out and your lemon scenes are also quite good. I can't wait for the next chapter, Hope to see it soon.

    Rebel
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  • From TheDon1023 on October 22, 2007
    for some reason i think Sakura will die. oh well
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  • From Lunchbox on October 19, 2007
    Really good stuff, I like were its headin. As for the poll, i dont give about Zabuza, but a LIVING fem Haku would be good *hint hint* ^_^
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  • From zeroharm on October 12, 2007
    wow... avoided this like the plague for the first few times I saw it on here, but forced myself to start reading it now that it has some chapters... Crossovers like this are normally some of the crappiest self indulgent stuff you can get on these types of sites, but you have done this one very very well. Naruto's training is unique, and Kyubi and Kurenai are definitely different than expected. Overall I think this is a good premise because if it had been someone other than Kenshin training him it would have still been good, but the fact that it was him actually adds to the story due to some kick ass writing. On a more personal note I trust you to choose Haku's fate, but I would prefer to see her as a girl... a sad life deserves more has planted her sex firmly in my fan fiction universe and anything else wouldn't feel right. P.S. the obligatory kick ass job and hope to see an update soon!
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  • From avatoa on October 10, 2007
    I am all for the second and third polls dealing with zabuza and haku, but i would prefer if haku lives and is a girl.
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  • From Kilrath on October 08, 2007
    another good chapter and as far as the polling goes i would say let zabuza and haku live just to mix things up a bit, it could also turn into a future conflict.

    The lemon here was also much better than your first one so keep up the good work
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  • From Kilrath on October 04, 2007
    This is an interesting concept and i have thus far very much enjoyed the story.

    Update soon
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