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Reviews for A Vivid Definition of Adolescence

By : KitsuneNoMari
  • From Arii on February 26, 2011
    *collapses in fit of manic laughter* Priceless! Oh, it hurts... My sides are killing me.

    Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.
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  • From ANON - lionflower on April 26, 2010
    Sorry for posting here, not registered for the forum, but the naruto story you are looking for is: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2620712/1/Deny . Called Deny by Kakasmai-King on fanfiction.net. It is a good one, no?
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  • From ANON - Sage on May 14, 2008
    WOW this story is so cute. I'd like to see naruto and kakashi alone without anyone else around.
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  • From nyge98 on February 09, 2008
    I love your story. I laughed so hard with the leech incidence. I remember that scene in the movie and it was great. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From NekoDemon on February 03, 2008
    omg. i couldn't stop laughing my ass off. i love that scene from evolution it never fails to bring tears of laughter to my eyes. lol.
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  • From kyoxcatx44 on January 30, 2008
    Wahhhhhhh!
    please continue....
    i love Kaka-Naru
    I never see ANYONE do it!!
    but you pulled it off and made it WONDERFULLY work :3
    Thank you
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  • From ANON - j.s on January 30, 2008
    still chuckling
    very funny chapter
    update soon
    poor poor kakeshi...i love him
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  • From 4ng3legg on January 29, 2008
    LOL - I love this story.

    "Cut the leg! Cut the leg!"

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  • From NeonOranges on November 27, 2007
    Hee, Iruka kicks ass when he's pissed off...

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2007
    Is that person Genmaaaa, I mean if he's busy wooing Iruka then the chuunin will have to save himself first from Genma's seduction instead of worrying about Naruto!
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  • From ANON - moo on November 26, 2007
    man i love this fic! i imagined iruka as a chicken go figure lmao! mother hen aha but anyways what's the new plan gonna be and when does naruchan finally get molested by the great kakashi sensei *pervertlaugh* oh when will it happen! XD keep up the good work hun!
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  • From ANON - z on November 26, 2007
    get a beta. if you already have one, get a better beta

    i also suggest using past tense instead of the awkward present tense

    i like the pairing =)
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 26, 2007
    I love this fic! I can't wait for more. It's hysterical!!! More soon please!!
    Slave
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  • From akume on November 26, 2007
    Interesting storyline. Quite hilarious too. Please add another chapter soon. Until then. Ja ne.
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  • From Hen on November 26, 2007
    This is really funny! I like a light-hearted take on Kaka/Naru.
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