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Reviews for This is my Goodbye

By : Luma
  • From ANON - duzieinu chick on January 24, 2008
    this is such a sad story, but it is really good. I love it. Poor Naruto, I feel so bad for him, I almost cried. Your a great writer, please continue this story, it would be a shame if you didn't.
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  • From nyge98 on January 10, 2008
    I have never cried this hard in my life. I really want to know what will happen to Naruto in the end. I hope you write again soon.
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  • From lupin2000 on January 09, 2008
    omg... i love this story... poor naru... plz update soon
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 24, 2007
    Whoa, that was INTENSE!! So are Sasuke and Sakura dating? Why is Naruto dying .. is it because he and Kyuubi are merging? You did a good job with the angst, making it real and heartwrenching. I can't wait to see what you do with this.

    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on October 15, 2007
    Wow I'm all teary eyed. Great writing.
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  • From solitare1 on October 15, 2007
    Good grief this is good! Please give me more SOON!
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  • From MoveThemHands on October 15, 2007
    Ahh! This fic is so perfect! Good god I love it!

    Words can't express how I feel about this fic but it makes me so happy to read it! I know that is extremely odd because it is so sad and angsty and depressing but that is exactly what I love about it!

    I love how it can just pull you down into the depths of loneliness and sorrow Naruto feels, its like you can feel what he is going through and it hurts. To be able to do that to a reader is simply amazing!

    God I love this! It would make me sad if it somehow turned happy but however you write it I'm more then positive that it will be satisfying so please update as soon as you can. Thank you for sharing this
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  • From yeagerbomb on October 15, 2007
    um... i would like to be on the list: authress16@yahoo.com

    but, maybe you didn't notice, you've posted the prologue twice.~
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  • From ANON - Athena on October 15, 2007
    This is a really good start to a fanfic. I can't wait for your next chapter, and I'd like to be on the list of those that you e-mail when you update! You can use the e-mail listed with my name (andiyoshiko@comcast.net) and I'll get it almost right away. Thanks, and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Olivia on September 28, 2007
    OMG I LOVED IT IT WAS SO SADDD! I WAS TOUCHED!!! please write more!!

    update update update!

    i cant wait for the next chapter,,

    Olivia
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  • From ANON - Nova on September 28, 2007
    Such a good work! But so sad...who am I kidding, that's why I love it! Anyways, you actually do perfectly sense. People always hurt their most beloved ones, so it's natural that you kill Naruto-kun becase you love him. To kill someone you have to notice him before, ne?
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  • From solitare1 on September 28, 2007
    I just read this again, It is heart breaking and i am sitting here crying like an idiot. Please continue this story I beg you!
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  • From solitare1 on September 27, 2007
    Oh please say you are going to write more!!
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  • From LadyWolf on September 27, 2007
    It's very sad that he has been put in so much pain...I feel it as I read this. What's killing him? Is it the demon or is his body tired of having the people in the village hate him so. Its a shame with other's spite and hatred can actually kill someone mentally, spiritually and phsycially....

    Sorry for the rambling......

    I hope you continue.
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