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Reviews for Detention

By : Lyndsay
  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Heh. Screwed over, "and he wasn’t going to reward the crummy day." Love his adamancy. ^^ . . . . Lemme guess: His teacher's Kakashi, right? . . . . Ooh, dating Sasuke already, eh? Heheheh. (*sly glance*) >_> . . . . Boy, Sasuke sure is a pain, isn't he. :heart: . . . . (*sigh*) Sorry, Naruto, but the fact that you BOTH got detention is your fault. And no, he can't take the blame for you. Now, if he were to blame for something (say, copying YOUR work) and wouldn't confess, THEN I’d have more sympathy with you. . . . Hmm. Well, I guess Sasuke could've at least helped. . . . He called you "stupid," stupid. . . . I gotta say, the lame excuses Naruto's making are rather annoying. Sorry about that. (*smiles apologetically*) . . . . No resistance, Sasuke? . . . . I wonder how they got together in this story. . . . Heh. He's such a tease. . . . They're gonna get busted, aren't they? . . . . Love the dirty talk. Love how stoic Sasuke gets so needy. . . . The humming's cute. And I like the bit about Naruto wanting to go a second round.

    Not bad. I think it could've used a longer intro, and the hot scene could've been dragged out longer, but the wording and progression was nice.
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on March 22, 2008
    Awesome oneshot.
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  • From ANON - riddlestar (not signed in) on March 16, 2008
    you really write good smut. and im always a fan of narusasu. keep it up. :)
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  • From kchan on October 08, 2007
    Wonderful piece of smut. I love SasUKE, and seeing him horny like that begging Naruto is just incredibly hot. Thank you very much, made my day.
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  • From cynaga on September 26, 2007
    Everyone loves detention porn and this was especially well written ~ YUM!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on September 25, 2007
    LOVE IT! XD Well now. I can go to bed contently. heheh. So much for studying for my test tomorrow too. Oh well. This was worth it. ^^ I just love Naruto as seme. Of course, he's a good uke too. XD
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  • From animeaddict666 on September 25, 2007
    Stupid Naruto wants seconds of everything: Sasuke and ramen!

    Loved this little jewel of a oneshot.
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  • From Misa on September 25, 2007
    That was just hot! Pretty much straight-forward concept (therefore PWP XD) but a nice read I enjoyed.
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