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Reviews for The 'Million Dollar' Man

By : brook13baby13
  • From ANON - LoveSasukeNaruto on November 27, 2010
    Continue with the story, I love it, it made me laugh my pants wet...!!! ^O^
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  • From Silkylove on January 05, 2010
    Let me just start with first, just started and now up to date, loving the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Dirty Itachi. Tsk tsk tsk. Lol aldo keep an I on your grammer? Oh well either way lovin' it!!!!!!
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  • From hisoka on October 03, 2009
    ohh...never use a shoe box.fired damn now what,sasuke still didnt answer the question either what to do what to do. how hes stuck with his perverted older brother who may get him at any time i hope the best for sasuke and his health and ease at evading itachi.hope you can update soon
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  • From mixedvietgurl on March 24, 2009
    noes wat?!! did his dad do something to minato??
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  • From hisoka on January 27, 2009
    shouldnt he be one of the first people to know hes fired,but then again sasuke needs to know too.i dont see why mikotos so sad.hmm...hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - _person_ on January 27, 2009
    Ch. 2
    q=que
    dump ass=dumb ass
    I thought that the grammer needed work and that you should use a dictionary instead of guessing the word and letting spell check fix it for you. But other than that everything was decent, especially the characterization.
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  • From goodchaos on January 27, 2009
    Love your story! Keep up the good work!
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  • From Ikippiki on January 16, 2009
    Oh my! I can't wait to read more. Sakura looks more than crazy in this story, hopes she founds a BDSM partner and let our poor sexy Naruto alone. lol. I read all the chapters in one go (couldn't stop myself!), I really like your way of writting.
    Continue with the good work!
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  • From hisoka on January 02, 2009
    wow shits getting messed up for them but thats what feelings do ne.knew itachi wouldnt be happy about hearing were sasuke is,hes already spitting lightning.and these sex talks really that just sucks for both sasuke and naruto ouch noone wants to hear that especially with your principal drunk and in the room,now she just knows to much even if you have blackmail on her.cant wait for updates
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  • From ANON - Miss M on December 13, 2008
    Wow, this shit actually received 101 reviews? Honey, I like where the story's going but there's too many grammar and spelling mistakes littered in every chapter. Find yourself a better betta that isn't kissing your ass like every numb nut that reads your story wishing for more.
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  • From goodchaos on December 01, 2008
    I hope you get your writing MOJO back soon!! I just found this fic & I love it!! So plz I hope you don't give up on it, and continue.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2008
    YAY more.
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  • From UzumakiTheDobe on November 24, 2008
    I love it! You really are a good writer that gives one good insperation. Keep it up, can't wait to see what will happen next! :)
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  • From tawanawelch on November 24, 2008
    This was a good chapter. I'm so happy Naruto and Sasuke finally did something.:) I hope they get to continue another time or night. I also love Gakuen Heaven it's my favorite. I've got lots of pics for my desktop of them all. I finally got a chance to see the other a few months ago and loved it as well. You've got GREAT taste. GREAT stories as well!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 23, 2008
    That was cute. Please use spell and grammar check in the future though. The grammatical errors take away from the quality of the story. Wonderful job otherwise.
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