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Reviews for Bonded

By : emeraldfire84
  • From AEMcKell06 on October 14, 2007
    Oh. My. God. That was... wow. I was so focused on the story, that my vision has blurred slightly... it's fine now though. But seriously, that was amazing, and i am eagerly awaiting an update... if there is one. I'm assuming there is because it would suck to just leave the story hanging like that. It was almost like i was personally whitnessing this... It could be that i was so drawn to this because i've always wanted someone to draw a protrait of me or something, kind of like that. Maybe not naked... but i dunno. I am completely and utterly impressed. This is definatly one of the best fanfic's i've ever read. and i've read a lot. Maybe not as many as some people... but it certainly seems like a lot. So... congrats! You are an awesome adult fanficion writer! Well, i think you are! Keep up the GREAT work!

    Amy
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  • From ANON - Fino on October 13, 2007
    Ahhhh! what is it!!!!!
    Oh man I love that chapter, it is just, just, Gorgious is about the best word to use there. Oh i could feel the intimacy rolling off your words. Beautiful, just beautiful!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I am officialy addicted
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  • From ANON - ashez on October 12, 2007
    I'm not normally one for yaoi, but this really calls for a sequel (or even an outtake) where Sai tries this with Naruto. If you don't want it in story you could always write on as an outtake. The results would be freakin hilarious. Naruto: No wonder he always calls mine small! LMAO I'd be interested in that threesome possiblity joked about in the fic as well. Damn, would that be funny.
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on October 12, 2007
    Hey, wasn't this based off of a hentai doujinshi? Not that, basing off of it was a bad thing, it made it neat if you've read the doujinshi in question. It was really well written. Will there be more chapters? Sai's defintily become smitten with her...
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  • From gaara89 on October 11, 2007
    wow...just wow! amazing! i like this alot. i hope you continue soon.
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  • From ANON - puppydog on October 11, 2007
    It was pretty cute. Are there going to be anymore chapters?
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  • From ANON - invisible83 on October 11, 2007
    I would have logged on but I forgot my username, and can't be bothered to search, just took a time out read chap 3 as the HAWTNESS was getting to me. ;p.
    Kinda ruined reading, as I spent most of my time thinking of how someone could put into words the rawness of everything SEX.
    Gonna go back and reread again without praising your excellent writing skills over each sentence.

    Please write a Sakura/Sasuke.... please consider my request any plot, or no plot at all. Just include hot smexing (as you call it)... as you've guess I'm a sasu-saku fan but love to read other Sakura pairing as long as it is written well, good grammar-spelling-some sort of plot etc.... But yours has that extra zest of smuttyness..;p
    (gosh i sound like a perv)
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  • From roxnroll on October 11, 2007
    Loved it. I don't usually read Sai/Saku fics. However, I always read your fics and have loved everyone of them, this one included. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From razorsympathy on October 10, 2007
    *grabs a towel to mop up drool.* You have to continue this!!!! I want, need, must have, MORE!!! Are they gonna hook up and be steady, i can't wait to see what comes next! expessually if Sai tries this with Naruto, lol.
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  • From undercoverfreak on October 10, 2007
    so so awesome, loved it big time, please, if you are done, do a epilogue, if not, I am looking forward to what is next. I would love to see what happened after the sex? And what does everybody else think? lol. Jo
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  • From ANON - V on October 10, 2007
    Goodness! This is awesome, apparently you're good with any paring you choose! Up till now, this one is my favorite. I loved the way you describe everything while staying in character. And I think that with Sai, there are a bunch of stuff and ideas can be written. I really liked it! Keep on writing!
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  • From antilogicgirl on October 09, 2007
    Hmm. It was--just like most stories that play on Sai's social ineptitude--strangely funny. I'm assuming that it's not quite finished at Chapter 3...but I guess that we'll just have to wait? There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major. For the most part, quite well done, and because of the odd humor, I quite like it. Hurray for Sai smiling, too. Because he seems lacking in the sincerity department. If you're going to do a fourth chapter, take your time. Have fun!

    a/j
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  • From ANON - Laini on October 09, 2007
    Wow,awesome chap. Now thats the sakura i know,taking charge dammit! lol. Hmmm i wonder how close sakura and sai actually FEEL now,interesting. How many chapters is this fic gonna have anyway? Its becoming one of my favs lol. Update soon chica,cant wait to read more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 09, 2007
    So cruel...
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  • From moonymuch on October 02, 2007
    *fans self* That was hot. Poor Sai, though...still clueless...but the whole sex god thing makes up for it, I suppose. XD
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