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Reviews for A Bundle of Wonder . . . Or So I Hope

By : WonderouslyDead
  • From ANON - Billie on September 24, 2007
    Definitely Sasuke because they belong together. Imagine angsty Sasuke w/ a baby.
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  • From ANON - fennie on September 24, 2007
    i pick sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2007
    I like it so far.
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  • From ANON - Irukafan61 on September 24, 2007
    This is a good story, I hope you keep writing it. I also hope Naruto gets them back for hitting and abandoning that baby girl. I have always liked the pairing of Sasuke/Naruto. So I would like this story to be Sasuke/Naruto. ^_^ Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Teme on September 24, 2007
    Well, out of the three that you listed, I must say that I'm choosing Sasuke. Great story, update soon.
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  • From Lavinia on September 24, 2007
    ooh... I really hope that you will continue this! Seems original! Just so that you know, I bookmarked it, and will be checking for new chapter every day (an obsession of mine, to check the fictions I'm reading), so the point is that I really hope that you're going to continue...
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  • From BlackSandGara on September 24, 2007
    Oops.... I forgot to say what my e-mail is it is:
    BlackDragonRose5@aol.com
    if you want me to Beta e-mail me
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  • From BlackSandGara on September 24, 2007
    Ello,
    9-24-07

    My Vote would be a threesome with Gaara and Sasuke.... but I don't know if you do that. So… if I have to pick one I would have to first ask what the time setting is and if it is an AU or not.

    My Review would be that you have a really great idea going here. The flow of the story was very good but I have a question shouldn’t of Naruto heard Nataku-san name as well? And are Kosuke and Nataku both males? For Kosuke seem to be the over powering tall alpha male (and the seme) while Nataku was the one holding the baby and seem to be submissive (aka the uke) and you said: "Nataku nodded rubbing HIS eyes to stop the tears and in a blink they both disappeared into the night." So then they are both males and somehow they have a baby girl and they are getting rid of it.... what?

    ~The Black Sand of Gara

    P.S. If you need a Beta I would love to do it but I do go to school and work so me getting back to you could be a little slow but I would try my best to get them back as quick as possible.

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  • From Dragon7 on September 24, 2007
    Great chapter I think this should be a Naruto/SasUKE fic with Sasuke as the UKE.
    I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Hmmm on September 24, 2007
    I like the way this story started out and I'm looking forward to the next update. If I had to choose, I believe that I would choose Sasuke to be our favorite blonde and that baby girl. So I choose Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - Anon, yaoi girl. on September 24, 2007
    Sasuke, It's has to be Sasuke. Naruto belongs with Sasuke. End of story!
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  • From ANON - A fan on September 24, 2007
    This is the start of a great story, I want more. BTW, I vote for sasuke. :D
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  • From Kagenoshi on September 24, 2007
    Gaara, Gaara, Gaara!! Thats my vote! I really like this story and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
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  • From ANON - _Kinkey_Kitsune_ on September 24, 2007
    wow i luved this XD keep goin its gud :)
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  • From dragonite2388 on September 24, 2007
    ohh i like this story, keep it up!

    as for your poll... id vote for sasuke! ehehe
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