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Reviews for The Naruto Chronicles

By : Zagger
  • From ANON - chemdude on September 29, 2007
    2. Haku

    man, i have never reviewed a story in this site, and let me tell you that the haku chapter was awsome, lemon aside, naruto's death was something i didnt see coming. i thought that he was gonna survive.

    couple of questions though,
    when naruto saw 'the tunnel' that allowed him to take the rakiri instead of haku, was that hirashin?
    it appears that when 'arashi' was conceived, most of the kyuubi chakra was transfered to haku through the child, correct?
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  • From SamZelRavSmash on September 29, 2007
    While both chapters were good, the first is better. I can't explain why, but it just is. If I recall, you mentioned at the top of CH2 about making CH1 into a story if you got enough reviews. If so, consider this a review for that. It was brilliantly done.
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  • From kerrde06 on September 27, 2007
    I think your one-shots are very good and enjoy reading them. It seems to me you are kinda doing the same thing Demon God of Chaos did with all his one-shots but in my opinion yours have so far been better since you have a better story to go with your lemons than DGoC did. I am not trying to badmouth DGoC because I think he does great lemons but I think he needs to build on the story aspect to back up the lemons. Anyways, my vote for the other biju in the Naruto/Kyuubi/? pairing is for Nibi. I would also like to request a Naruto/Rangiku pairing since she is kinda like the bleach version of Kurenai as far as looks go (what I mean is they are both hot looking with a good sized chest). I really look forward to the Naruto/Yoruichi one-shot since Yoruichi is my favorite female bleach character. I don't know how into the bleach anime or manga you are but if you could do a Naruto/that woman who shot Ichigo and the rest of his rescue group into the shinigami city during the Rukia retrival arc using that huge ass cannon, that would be great. She wore the red dress, had short hair, kinda seemed a little like the bleach version of Anko in personality. I remember that she had a brother that went with them who ran away from any fight if he could (I really hate that I can't think of her name).
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  • From Phoenix477 on September 27, 2007
    Awesome chapter a little too much angst though but whatever still awesome
    There were alot of little spelling mistakes but nothing big
    Oh and incase you don't know it's rumored that Rukobi is a brown haired six tailed badger
    Also will you be updating this weekly or monthly?
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  • From ANON - touya on September 27, 2007
    good very good ad isaribi sasame inoue orihime (bleach) and hinamori momo (bleach)
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  • From ANON - Se'irim on September 27, 2007
    Yet another great chapter/story.

    Well, for ideas:
    Rin
    Fem!Sasuke
    Fem!Gaara (Don't think any exists, but it could be good)
    Uchiha Mikoto

    Looking forward to the next.

    Se'irim
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on September 27, 2007
    I have a question I know Kushuna is Naruto`s actual mother`s name but her is my question this Akira is she somebody you made up to be his sister or did they make it offical that Naruto does have a sister that is named Akira
    that is all I am wondering about could yo e-mail me and let me know
    other than that your fic is really good
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 27, 2007
    lol
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  • From ANON - D on September 26, 2007
    Well this was a nice chapter as well as the one before. To be honest I'm a Naruto x Hinata fan, but there are two other people that I can see being with him (one more recently then the other). Those two are a female Haku and Yugito (sorry others don't strike me as connecting as well with him). Now before you mention Hinata being in a clan and having her family (like one person did in a review on FF.net), they never treated her that well since she didn't measure up to their expectations (and the whole prestige from being a Hyuuga, wouldn't act as a positive reinforcement due to being told she's a failure by other Hyuuga's including her father).

    Sorry for that little rant bit on Hinata. As for adding in other people, I say to put in Yukie and lets see what your mind comes up with. A request on some more two girl chapters are one with Haku and Hinata, and one with Yugito and Hinata (if I'm lucky I might get this since you like both Haku and Yugito or you could just do one that is all three but that goes against what you've said in your author's notes).

    Keep up the good work and hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kyuubi King on September 26, 2007
    Great chapter,really unexpected to see Naruto protect Haku like that and her getting some of Kyuubi's powers and kill Gato like that.

    Great chapter,and yes put Isaribi,Sasame,Princess Yukie,hell almost every girl from the filers and movies(add the antagonists too!)...I'm a bigger pervert that Jiraiya...WOO HOO!
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  • From ANON - Battousai222 on September 26, 2007
    Forgot to review other one so just did that. Now this one that I just read and finished. YOu are so awsome!!!! You so rock. One person I would say to add on the list would be Rin. She so hot damn!!!!

    Then the way this one ended with Naruto deing, was s sad but ok I guess. Loved the thing still.
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  • From ANON - Battousai222 on September 26, 2007
    Yo!!!!!!!!!! Loved the one shot. Truly a work of art!!!
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  • From MissUzumaki22 on September 26, 2007
    Awesome story. I can't wait for more. You should consider doing these ......

    Naruto/Sakura/Sakura's mom

    Naruto/Sakura/fem.Kakashi/fem.Sasuke

    and

    Naruto/femGaara/Temari

    I know there is alot of gender bendes, but those are lemon i've been wanting to see for awhile.

    Looking forward to the next chaptr with Kushina
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  • From ANON - BastardOmega on September 25, 2007
    hey i loved the chapter/oneshot, it was all cute and cuddly and fairly well written so i applaud you on that one. By the way i looked down the list, and i didn't noticed Hana Inuzuka(If i spelled it right.) name on the list. it's almost no fanfic's of her and naruto, and if every chapter is like this one i know you will make a good one. until next time. ja ne.

    Peace & Love BastardOmega
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  • From raiykazuma on September 25, 2007
    Good story so far... Little spelling and grammar errors here and there but otherwise good... I lol'd at the cat and blender thing... I have an aunt who has a cat and the cat likes to jump and climb stuff. Since my aunt is a pastry chef, she has this mixer/blender thing and one day she got a picture of the cat inside the blender that looked so adorable (the cat was fine btw)... Anyway, hope you update soon and a request for Kushina & Konan (danger and incest ... what fun!). Keep up the good work...
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