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Reviews for The Naruto Chronicles

By : Zagger
  • From nationofone on October 16, 2007
    Not trying to knock your stories or anything. I am just a little confused how you can have a hard time envisioning Naruto with the two females Kishi has set to be possible relationships for him in cannon. Yet you have no problem pairing him with characters we know practically nothing about including his own mother?
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  • From ANON - Chronostorm on October 16, 2007
    Well that was interesting not much else to say really so keep it up.
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  • From ANON - D on October 16, 2007
    Well this was an enjoyable chapter and how you portrayed Kyuubi was nice. The only question I would have
    concerning your story would be exactly who died. Was it only Kakashi, Yamato, and Sai who died at Madara's
    hands or did the others die as well? That's my only question concerning this chapter since it seems people are
    confused a bit about it as well. Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on October 16, 2007
    Well that was good. I want to know what happened to the others that were there. And how did they all get killed with two Hyuuga's and a good number of excellent shinobis. I liked the story please update more... Josh
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  • From ANON - Se'irim on October 16, 2007
    Another great story to the collection...

    Damn, did you have a bad day? i don't think i've ever read a non Evil!Naruto story with as many
    character deaths in it, as this one. But hey i still loved it, refreshing.

    It seemed a bit rushed at the ending, 'well you slept and Madara killed everybody'. But of course,
    it is a lemon, not a story.

    Looking forward to the next.

    Se'irim

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  • From ANON - LonewolfBloodstorm on October 16, 2007
    I would just like to say i like your fics. I kinda hope that the hinata and sakura fics turn out ok most people for some reson dont like them. Just to snub them you could have a naruto sakura hinata threesome. I however have an idea for somone who would be perfect for naruto, how about Kagome from inuyasha?
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  • From UzumakiIno on October 15, 2007
    Good second chapter, if a little tragic. And just to let you know, it's KaRIN, not KaREN (lower case, not caps, of course).
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  • From UzumakiIno on October 15, 2007
    Excellent first chapter. Not only does the erotica work, but the story itself was very well done.
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  • From ANON - alboc on October 10, 2007
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - hunter on October 07, 2007
    good chapters! I hope too see a Naruto/Akira incest! (I'm not a fan of incest, both anime,manga and reality but Naruto/sisterOC seems hotter then any pairing i know(in my opinion)
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  • From ANON - . on October 07, 2007
    well i have a request how about you find away to do a lemon rayne from blood rayne and naruto
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  • From korrd on October 04, 2007
    This is great. I've noticed you've had Naruto impregnate both girls so far. Will this continue to be a trend? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - ?£4%^^£" on October 04, 2007
    ?"$%"!£&*
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  • From ANON - John Fitzgerald on October 04, 2007
    I hope that you will update all of your stories again soon. Thanks.
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  • From cdog21 on October 04, 2007
    Pretty good so far and I can't wait to see what is gonna happen next, but come on if your gonna do incest then why not big titted Tsunade. I mean save for the fact that Naruto is always blabbing it there is nothing on that woman that looks 53 unless she uses her full power and how many times has that actually happened.
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