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Reviews for The Naruto Chronicles

By : Zagger
  • From ANON - max on October 25, 2007
    add all the tail demons make a great finisher
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  • From ANON - Andrew on October 22, 2007
    I like this so far, you are a least adding some pairings i like, i make end up enjoying this more than Demon God of Chaos' collection of Naruto one shots. May i at least ask that you add Shizune and Tsunade into this collection?
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  • From ANON - mr. blogtastic on October 22, 2007
    You are a Legend among us mere mortals. For ideas, I'm thinking Naruto has himself a dogday, and takes on Tsume and Hana Inuzuka; separately and/or together. Yakumo Kurama is one too, she was that girl in the anime, who Kurenai taught before getting Team 8. Tsunade, Shuzine, Matsuri from Sand, some of his friend's moms, Orochimaru's daughter, Mikoto Uchiha, Kim Possibe girls (namely Kim, Shego, Yori, and Bonnie). Female Neji, that could be interesting. What about, Kyuubi makes Naruto go into heat, and he donkey's all the girls you have in the list at once (Kage Bunshin is such a wonderful jutsu)? Jessoca Rabbit, Read Or Die girsl (Yomiko, Nancy, Michelle, Nenene), Some girls from Eureka 7(Gidget, Talho, Anemone, Eureka), Kikyo, Kagome, and Ayame (the demon fox girl) from Inuyasha. Tons of girls you can chose from.
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  • From NenshouMizu on October 21, 2007
    Three things mainly. 1) Hyuga has only one u. Thought you should know. 2) A decent name for a female Gaara is Nariko. Google Heavenly Sword; the main character Nariko looks a lot like a female Gaara. 3) You're very impressive as a writer. Well done. Unfortunately, I have no ideas for a female Sasuke at this time. I might back to you though.
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  • From ANON - yumbo on October 21, 2007
    I know you said no more Bleach, but I had a thought of a good one. What about one with Naruto, Soifon, and Yoruichi. Could start out as Naruto with Yoruichi, and Soifon wanting in on the action (taking in account her obsession with Yoruichi).
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  • From ANON - crimsonskydeath on October 20, 2007
    If you do a 55th chapter you could have it as a super chapter where Naruto has sex with everyone who he already has had sex with in this fic.
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  • From ANON - crimsonskydeath on October 20, 2007
    Maybe for chapter 54 Naruto could maybe be the Juubi and all of the other bijuu's are his wife's/fiance's/girlfriend's.
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  • From UzumakiIno on October 20, 2007
    VERY tragic third chapter, but also very good.
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  • From ANON - AJTalon on October 20, 2007
    Hey! What about Yukie from the Naruto movie?
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  • From shaselai on October 19, 2007
    great so far, are you going to write about other Naruto females? Like ramen girl, tsunami, yuki, and maybe other female chars in the anime?
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  • From actionliker on October 19, 2007
    OH SNAP!! your stories are legend! update soon like Konan and Akari!
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  • From ANON - something on October 19, 2007
    Great set of stories you got. Really I enjoy reading them. As for suggestions, how about Naruto/Samus from the Metroid series? And maybe Zelda and/or Midna from the LOZ games. Other people would enjoy those. Some that I'd like to see is maybe a Naruto/Fem.Rock Lee. And maybe a Naruto/Riza Hawkeye or Naruto/Rose from FMA. Maybe some Naruto/One Piece character, and/or a Naruto/Harry Potter character like Naru/Tonks, Naru/Cho Chang, or maybe even a Naru/Fem.Harry. Again, just suggestions. You could most likely make those happen, and do a good job at it. You did a good job with some of your other stories.
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  • From ANON - hoyt on October 18, 2007
    wow the yugito fic was the best narutoxyugito fic out currently i believe
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  • From ANON - Battousai222 on October 17, 2007
    Yo... DAMN good story and chapter so far. I love it tons and you sooooooooooooooo rock. I didn't really like Naruto die in the Haku one but it turned out ok I guess. Keep up the awsome work and I can't wait for the Kushina one. Those are just awsome. Your not the first one to do a mother thing but you will be the first to do Kushina actually. I look forward to that one emencly.

    A possible story.... hemmmm.... I'd have to say Tsume. I have NEVER seen that done before. If you don't know who that is, it's Kiba's mom and Hana's mom. That has NEVER been done done before. EVER!!!! I would love to see that happen. You'd be the first yet again. Just a suggestion though.

    Keep up the awsome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dumbolino on October 17, 2007
    Since this was mentioned first, I think that you should just leave Gaara the same. I wouldn't put it past the Yondamie Kazekage to pass Gaara off as a boy, because lord knows a female weapon would be seen as weak (which we all know is bull). I have to admit that I'm quite curious about how you plan on pulling off the ones with Naruto x his mom and his sister, the crossovers, and the Hanabi and Hinata one. For the Biju poll, I vote for Hachibi (why not let him have at the two most powerful biju, it makes one hell of a statement). As for the other animes/video games, what about DBZ (as there are lots of ladies to chose from), Full Metal Alchemist (same reason), and Finat Fantasy XII (See how Naruto handles Ashe, Penelo, or Fran).

    I love this series so far (although the first chapter confused me at times, and the second was very sad), but this is the best one so far. Killing off Hebi, Pein and Konan (possibly the two strongest embers of Akatsuki, though we don't know much about Tobi) all at once was funny. I'm sure the Konan one will be awesome, especially if it involves Pein being confused about Konan and Naruto being together. Any who, love how this one ended, but felt kinda bad about all the people that got offed. I must say that I am curious about who ended up with who.

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