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Reviews for The Naruto Chronicles

By : Zagger
  • From Aaronleach45123 on February 19, 2008
    I love all the Chapters but my favorite was the Female Sasuke.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Jin on February 19, 2008
    The plot is a little weak and the dialogue needs some work, but the smut is top notch. Not bad over all.
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  • From ANON - ...... on February 19, 2008
    you'll do incest, but not a naruto/tsunade pairing? why?
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  • From Mango2508 on February 19, 2008
    A new chapter, weeh! I can honestly say that i thought you had abandoned the series. Oh well kudos to you.

    NarutoxFemSasuke is a very rare pairing, and i couldn't be more thrilled that you chose to make it, i don't think there have been made any real lemons with this pairing, there has been a few where Sasuke uses the Orioke, but since it is still yaoi, it gives me the creeps. So it's amazing with a real Female Sasuke lemon.

    I really liked how you explained the female Sasuke, often writers doesn't dig very deep and it's nice to see good one.

    So if you overlook the few grammatical errors, yet another amazing lemon from you, and i can't wait for the next one.

    Malach Adonai
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  • From ANON - adolthered on February 19, 2008
    I must say that I really love your story ! Every chapter you'd written, It was like I'm reading a really good short-story. You can make your reader satisfied in the end of every chapter,I'm not talking about Lemon but the whole story ! Please update as soon as possible. I beg you.
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  • From ANON - HK on February 19, 2008
    Oi.......try to be a bit more kinky....
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  • From DragonMan220 on February 18, 2008
    I like Miko, she's cool. I'd like to request a threesome between Naruto, Hinata, and her later, I think Hinata would get along well with her since their fathers are similar and they both like Naruto but couldn't admit it, though for different reasons.
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  • From Chronostorm on February 18, 2008
    My goodness i could name off combinations i would like to see Naru/Hina/Sasu(fem) and Naru/Hina/Haku/Sasu(fem) as well and also ever since the time i read the Kyuubi one i got this stuck in my head when Kyuubi techincally breaks Hinatas heart there what if instead of leaving it like that Kyuubi made Hinata her and Naruto's sex slave toy right in front of everyone just something i thought i would through in for that.
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  • From ANON - crazyfoxdemon on February 18, 2008
    Good story. :) You really need to write a story on FF.net with this pairing :)
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  • From ANON - Menumber1.11 on February 18, 2008
    Yo its me, great chapter though it seemed shorter than the other ones. Another thing is you could do a naruto/femkyuub/nibi/yugito. that could work out well And if possible move up evil kyuubi in the order. Im really looking forward to the nibi one. Are you gonna use your idea for your story on fanfiction. Well sorry for the poor organization of this review

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  • From ANON - dave on February 18, 2008
    Thanks for your writing. I would love to see the Hinata and Hanabi story, I know you said that you would do single pairings first, but I wanted you to know that someone out there was looking forward to that particular chapter. Also the regular one with Hinata has me excited too. Thanks for your hard work.

    Dave
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  • From ANON - Reaper on February 14, 2008
    awesome. the sex scenes in the rival the ones made by Demon G0d of Chaos. i can't wait to read the next chapter it's going to be awesome. especially the sex scenes.
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  • From jared13000 on February 09, 2008
    you are a good writer. i finly decided to get an acount just to review thie story. cant wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - badboywest on February 06, 2008
    u might wish to update more offen and nice little story too
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  • From human on February 01, 2008
    I loved the yugito story and the Kyuubi story (Crying)...sniff....THEY WERE SO BUITIFUL!!!!
    I actually got a idea for a Naru/Kyuu fic if you want to hear but I havn't written a lemon before, I also have a idea for Tayuya that doesn't end as rape or her a complete slut ( She's too awsome for that ) and I vote for Nibi. UPDATE NOW PLZ.
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