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Reviews for The Naruto Chronicles

By : Zagger
  • From ANON - noone on March 04, 2008
    for the whoever threesome i vote for akira naruto's twin kushina and kyuubi
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  • From ANON - the.awsome.guy on February 28, 2008
    Whoo!!! Another great one-shot from you! All of these chapters are so good, I re-read them each about 4-5 times.
    Keep it up!

    And, if you're still taking requests, I'd like to request 2 pairings.

    1. Naruto/Midna: Truthfully, I've never seen a Naruto/Zelda girl. Theres been Naruto/Someone from the Naruto world in Hyrule, but never a crossover pairing. And Midna is one of my favorite Zelda girls. And the plot is really simple: Midna is about to go back into the Twilight Realm, but because she craked it, she's sent somewhere else, a place with a certain blonde-haired fox.

    2. Naruto/Fem.Rock Lee: Never seen one of these, either. And again, its really simple. Theres been a genjutsu on Lee for all her life, and is so life like hardly anyone can notice it. But, because of it, she has no chakra. And how to break it? Well, Naruto's never used the Kyuubi's chakra around Lee before..... Besides, you know that a female Lee would so fall for Naruto's never-back-down motto.

    Again, great one-shots! And even if you don't take my requests, I will still read your stories, especially this one! Thanx!
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  • From ANON - idontknow.. aybesomethingawsome on February 26, 2008
    Great story(ies)! Really good works, especially these last 2. You said that you need help with the Naruto/Samus wright? Well I have 3 ideas. One is where samus crash lands on an unknown planet (the shinobi nations) and her suit is damaged and she must resert to her Zero suit, and meets Naruto who helps her with some nuke-nins, and you can take it from there. Another is where Naruto is abducted by the Space pirates because of the Kyuubi, and Samus rescues him and takes him with her on her ship to take back to his world, but they fall for each other on the way. The 3rd, or use this as another chapter idea is to use the story line from the Subspace Emissary in Super Smash Bros Brawl, where instead of *spoilers* teaming with Samus to retrieve her suit, its Naruto.


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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2008
    Maybe you could add some more Naruto/Kushina/?? chapters (Hinata, Tsunade, Sakura)
    Possible foursome : Naruto/Hinata/Hanabi/OC (the girls' mother)
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  • From ANON - Je wolf on February 24, 2008
    hey great chapter another pairing that would be interesting is a Hana and Tsume Inusaka(sorry about spelling)
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  • From ANON - Cyraxr on February 23, 2008
    For your reader's choice foursome I vote for Tayuya, Anko, and Kyuubi(fem) they just seem like they would have a lot of fun with each other. Like the stories and keep up the good work. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, and Kurenai.
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  • From ANON - alboc on February 23, 2008
    Terrific fic, hope to see more of it.
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  • From UzumakiIno on February 21, 2008
    Konan was good, but her personality was a little, er, wild. Manga had her nothing like that during her full appearance. Your fic, anyway. Keep it coming.
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  • From UzumakiIno on February 21, 2008
    FemSasuke? Not bad, but kinda weird (I hate Sasuke, but it was actually all right).
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  • From Jin on February 20, 2008
    Why do all these oneshot have to end in pregnancy?
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  • From Mango2508 on February 20, 2008
    Have i ever told you how much i love you? no? well i do.

    Two chapters/stories in two days, you are on fire.

    NarutoKonan. While not one of my favorite pairings, you pulled it of very well... you made me a believer.

    The battle between Naruto and Pein was quick, powerful and still done with only a handful of useful techniques, basically exactly how a Shinobi fight should be. I always thought it was a bit stupid that a battle between two senior shinobi (people who perfect the art of stealth and assassination) would last a long time, with flashy techniques being thrown back and forth. Theoretically the first or second attack should always be the deciding one.

    Anyway, another A-level lemon, looking forward to the next one.

    Malach Adonai
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on February 20, 2008
    Great Chapter Can't Wait For The Next One.
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  • From ANON - Menumber1.11 on February 20, 2008
    Great chapter and are you going to keep updating this fast?

    P.S. you really should update power of 3

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  • From DragonMan220 on February 19, 2008
    Interesting Konan lemon, I can't wait to see the next one!
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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on February 19, 2008
    Very, very smexy. And probably my second favorite Naruto pairing, or nearly so. Realistically speaking, there is something seriously wrong with Kishimoto, because all of his best girl characters are guys. >_> Dude.

    There was a spelling error or two, I think, or rather a wrong word error. I think it was a 'too' instead of a 'to' and I /think/ there was a similar one with 'two' instead of 'too' somewhere. But that might have been something I'd read earlier today.

    Having Naruto be contemplating suicide was a lame plot device. The scene would have worked a lot better if Naruto was standing too close to the edge and Sasuke/Miko mistook it for a suicide attempt. It would also help the humor present at the end fit a little better, since the last bits didn't fit the feel of the rest of the story.

    Overall though, it was really good. The whole 'marking' thing was a bit cliche, but whatever. The motivation for it was easy to see, and easy enough to excuse, because it was for the sake of porn. It could have been a bit more polished, but I liked it.

    Also, you should consider looking up Hawk's "The Fanfiction Forum" and posting things there first to get more constructive comments before posting things. Or not. Whatever, moar.


    Later
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